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stevieb620 [2014-05-23 07:19:21 +0000 UTC]
great work, good composition.
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to brad328 [2014-05-23 03:49:03 +0000 UTC]
Admit it, Mindy would love to slug her one.
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brad328 In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2014-05-23 03:51:03 +0000 UTC]
Nah, Mindy's willing to give her the benefit of the doubt, unless she gets information that proves otherwise.
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to MaragrizX [2014-05-21 13:45:03 +0000 UTC]
Prodigy"Hey, I said you were tall and handsome, probably great in bed. Not my fault you aren't one of us."
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Stick-bag [2014-05-21 00:04:31 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, Jane would definately be the kind of person who'd regard "you're a credit to your race/people" as a perfectly fine compliment.
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Stick-bag In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2014-05-21 16:14:54 +0000 UTC]
Yes, but slowly. And I doubt she'll ever be able to completely shake that stuff off. The best we can probably hope for is somewhere around Connie's level.
It's just occurred to me, considering what era she came from, wouldn't she have faced some discrimination herself for being a woman? Nothing too serious and they probably shut up once she got her powers, but still...
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LoneStranger [2014-05-20 22:02:20 +0000 UTC]
I think the happy couple here needs to meet Warbuster sometime.
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LoneStranger In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2014-05-21 06:24:18 +0000 UTC]
We'll have to figure out a storyline for Jane Smith and the guy in the armor to meet.
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andrewr255 [2014-05-20 21:08:32 +0000 UTC]
With Steven and American Mom Jane really has got a lot of support now to help her in her transition and to hopefully make her stay the heroine everyone wants her to be.
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Woodclaw [2014-05-20 17:34:10 +0000 UTC]
Once again Jane allows her preconcrption to blind her.
In this case she seem to base her judgement on purely physical factors, completly ignoring her opponent inner strength. I have no doubt that she's superior to Mindy in terms of pure strength and technique, but Mindy is one of those people that just won't give up. Unless she beats Mindy until there's no atom of life left in her, I'm very positive that Mrs. Crane will come back and teat Jane a new one somehow.
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to Woodclaw [2014-05-20 20:10:13 +0000 UTC]
One thing Jane hasn't lost is arrogance and dismissing anyone she perceives to be "weaker" than she is.
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Knight3000 [2014-05-20 16:55:03 +0000 UTC]
Emily wouldn`t exactly like being called an easy win. I think she can go toe to toe with Jane.
Otherwise Steven and Jane seem to be getting along.
nicely done my dear
Cool piece by shotgung0d
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Levia-the-Dragon [2014-05-20 16:42:31 +0000 UTC]
Huh, well that's curious, the architect of 052's disassembly goes down... just another puppet perhaps.
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SouthernNerd [2014-05-20 16:08:42 +0000 UTC]
Funny thing is that the Georgian accent isn't that Southern from first hand experience. If you want a serious blend of southern accents head to Alabama and North Texas for a more accurate sound. It makes it even funnier that I reside in the Southern portion of Texas so I have heard some pretty strong and unique Southern accents. Also funny when I travel to Dallas, San Antonio, Austin, or Houston and hear people comment with, "You have such a thick Southern accent." Nice little story, and interesting seeing the Guardians from the perspective of a non Guardian. I also find it a bit interesting how I looked at the picture and those two look like they are from the Jersey area instead of one being from Georgia and one being from lands unknown.
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shotgung0d In reply to SouthernNerd [2014-05-20 16:33:50 +0000 UTC]
He's from Pennsylvania. Or at least he thinks he is.
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SouthernNerd In reply to shotgung0d [2014-05-20 16:36:56 +0000 UTC]
I just assumed he came down from a land down under. *Waits for anyone to get the joke*
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Levi-K-Whitney [2014-05-20 16:03:15 +0000 UTC]
Cedric Grey: "So... Jane thinks I smoke pot, huh? That's funny, 'cuz I never touch the stuff. It's totally worse. I'm stone sober!"
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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to Levi-K-Whitney [2014-05-20 20:06:48 +0000 UTC]
Jane has a lot of per-conceived notions about people, most of which aren't true at all.
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dagame2578 [2014-05-20 14:17:00 +0000 UTC]
Jane looking good as usual,great story
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jeandulin [2014-05-20 14:05:27 +0000 UTC]
Nice story; I love the writing style for the replies; could I take inspiration?
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jeandulin In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2014-05-20 20:12:33 +0000 UTC]
The dialogues are written like as for theater; more living; I had a easy reading because of this (I am French with a just correct English level so I appreciated to read this story which was very well written and easy to understand)
Cool to see this style; I am doing a too novelist style using the "he said, he answered, he replied, he asked..." Which are not my preffered style effect when I am not fluent in English; would you help/ advice me at writing?
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GreenUnicornArt [2014-05-20 13:43:48 +0000 UTC]
Jane Smith looks amazing!
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