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#foliage #sfm #treeforest
Published: 2018-11-11 22:19:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 952; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 1
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Comments: 6
Great render and camera work, but it misses life in my opinion, it is too flat.
make it pop fam
The brightest elements of an image should be white or something close, if its ok to clamp it down sometimes but only for very specific uses.
In there i assume the brightest element is supposed to be the sky, make it white with color curves or something
You need to get an attention point, something simple, colored and not too detailed where you can rest your eyes on. it also helps with the repartition of details
apart from that i suggest you to add some lens distortion to guide the viewers eye to the center by making these straights tree lines not so straight anymore, kinda like what a go pro does
Anyway, i know its very hard to make realistic/nice looking renders in sfm because you lack control so much on what you're doing.
once again, great render cant wait to see what you will do next
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for some reason my vision makes me see a puppet mask
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Adding one bright red or orange fruit in center of image will be nice. But it's good render overall even without fruits)
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it's very good, but I can't see nothing but a forest....
(still cool)
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