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Description EDIT: if you plan on making a sentoki, make sure the weapon you give them can be used in some sort of chore, as they always double as a tool.
well, after looking back at my old description of my kirby fan species ssbbforeva.deviantart.com/gall… , i decided to completely rewrite it, and make some new pictures, as the old ones suck bad.
for examples of other sentoki, see my characters kyomu ssbbforeva.deviantart.com/gall… and forta ssbbforeva.deviantart.com/gall…

the sentoki species appear in my fanfic A Recurring Nightmare, and if you want to make your own, please ask for my permission or give me proper credit

i will be making a page for the sentoki planet, sand star, soon.

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species: sentōki (sen-toe-key)

planet: sand star

physical appearence: sentoki are generally short creatures, an adult shorter than the average cappy, and a child nearly as small as a puffball. they have skin tones ranging from a light tan to a chocolate brown and, in some rare cases, a tawny yellow. their hair color matches their skin, albeit sometimes in darker shades. their eyes are brightly colored, and are slit like a cats. some sentoki dye the ends of their hair to match their eyes, but most choose black instead. their eyes are large and square-ish as children, eventually thinning to an almond shape or a sharp angle as they age. they have large, sharp canines, four fingers and partly retractable claws.

attire: all sentoki wear clothes that match their eye color, ranging in different shades for each different article of clothing. vests, shawls, shirts, overalls, and belts are worn by both adult genders. young girls usually wear short, sleeveless dresses or long shirts, and young boys wear vests or just a pair of pants. bracelets, ponytails, bandanas, and sweatbands are worn by all ages. jewlery and makeup are rare, but not unheard of.

abilities: all sentoki are born with an inate ability to use a certain type of tool that can be used in everyday life, and double as a weapon. kitchen knives, hatchets, rakes, hoes, sycthes, hammers, weighted nets, and even shovels are all wielded with uncanny skill and power. but what makes the sentoki so infamous is their dreaded "battle rage," or "flare." when danger looms or the sentoki is simply angry, their eyes will go harshly bloodshot and their pupils dilate to black slivers. claws emerge, teeth are bared, and the rager in question becomes bloodthirsty and demon-like. physical strength, hearing, and sight are all increased during a flare. this drastic personality change is shocking to both outsiders and sentoki alike, and most greatly dislike the loss of control. some are born with very weak flares, and have greater control over themselves, although they do not have nearly as much strength. then there are those who have very powerful battle rages, and can slip into one uncontrollably, snarling like a wild beast. no one is sure what causes the battle rage, but it is theorized that a massive flood of adreneline causes the clouded mind and burst of strength, and increased flow of blood causes the red eyes.

history: there are few written records of the sentokis' past, as they have only just started using paper. they do know, from old tales passed down through generations, that their ancestors once dwelled in the desert. when they found a small oasis in the middle of the desert, they started a small village, and started expanding the oasis into a larger plot of land. memories of cruel famines and harsh droughts haunt the community, and thus they are always working to keep the oasis alive.

interactions with others: the sentoki have little to no technology, and anyone trying to land on sand star are caught in the harsh winds just below the atmosphere. they are blown into the desert, and are never seen again. small groups of sentoki will try to find the crashed ship and bring back whatever they can salvage to the community. few aliens have managed to make their way into the oasis, and those few were given supplies and help for repairing its ship, so that they may be off of the planet and away from the safe oasis as fast as possible. some sentoki have left with those few aliens, trying to find more than constant work. those few deserters are never spoken of again, although they are rumored to be thriving.

tools: when a child turns 5 years old, they are taken to the forges to make their birth weapon. it is here, in the fiery embers, that the weapon is determined, and after careful guidence from the blacksmiths, the child takes its first steps towards coming of age. the weapon and the wielder will have a special bond, and no other works feels better in the sentoki's hand. depending on what the weapon is, the child immediatly begins learning how to use it to help the community. rakes, hoes, shovels, and scythes go to the fields to farm, axes and saws go to the forest to harvest wood, knives go to the kitchens, etc.

working: sentokis work all their lives, always trying to pull though another year. they see their little oasis in the massive desert as a gift, one that can crumble at the wrong touch. they work all day, everyday. the very young or the elderly help with cooking, or keeping the oasis clean and pristine.

community: there is no true goverment on sand star, and sentokis consider keeping their family well fed the highest priority. unless they have a surplus of food or supplies, each family will not be overly concerned with another's suffering. all families, however, participate in keeping the main fields healthy, and the harvest is equally shared. but if one family is larger than another and cannot survive on their share, then they must work extra and/or create their own little gardens on their small property. when a sentoki plans on marriage, they always do it with a different family, with the bride or groom coming to live with the others family, or starting a new one altogether.

legends: the sentoki are the last known species that still believe in the two banished gods, zero and zero2 (in my fanfic they are seperate entities, deal with it.). they belive that if they are wasteful or cause destruction, then they will attract the attention and hate of the gods. they fear invasion of dark matter above all else, and are trained from birth to always be on the lookout.

justice system: as there is no real government, when a decision concerning the entire community must be made, all of the families come together to vote on decisions. petty theft doesnt have a major punishment, and the thieves are usually forced to patrol the borders of the oasis (a dreadfully boring and uncomfortable job, due the scorching desert) for a few days. however, stealing food or water is greatly frowned upon, and considered very dishonorable to the thief's family. sentokis who steal food are forced to travel into the desert for one full day, and if they return, then they are allowed back into the community. killing is very rare, and is usually caused when a battle rage breaks out on accident. there is no punishment for killing, but the sentoki who lost control will always feel the shame, and some punish themselves. the greatest crime is damaging the crops or land, as this affects everyone who lives in the oasis. anyone caught destroying property or food is banished into the desert, or is executed.

burial: when a sentoki dies, they are buried on the very edge of the oasis, and a tree is planted over their body. these trees are considered sacred, and serve as a tombstone. flowers are planted around the grave, and ribbons, which are the same color as the deceased's eyes, are tied to the tree trunk.

dark-cutter steel: the sentokis' greatest secret is the fabled metal, dark-cutter steel. incredibly, when forged under the right circumstances, it will pass through rock, flesh, armor, etc. the only thing that it does cut is dark matter, and it is the ultimate weapon against this feared foe. you could relentlessly attack a possesed body, and hurt only the dark matter within. however, the steel is completely useless for anything else, and is also rather brittle. to remedy this problem, only a little bit is mixed into each weapon, along with regular steel. the result is a tool that can still do its job, be it in farming or during battle, but the sentoki who forged it is able to make it pass through flesh and slice dark matter at will. its ability to pass through metal or rock is lost, however.


current status: nobody knows what has happened to the sentoki. already a species that hardly anyone knew about, they have seemingly disappeared from the universe altogether. even the planet has vanished. although, it has been said, that on the last night that the planet was seen, black clouds obscured the stars in that corner of the galaxy...
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Comments: 54

Substitute101 [2015-09-22 11:54:25 +0000 UTC]

um...i feel really awkward rolling back here since i already have Anuli (who i actually drew recently, i just haven't posted the drawing yet because i'm lazy), but i think i'd feel worse continuing without permission, so...
i have an idea for a sentoki (purple eye color, female, and i'm thinking she would have left Sand Star as a little girl, with her family, but i have no idea how fast sentokis age, so i might have to change that, and...well, that's kind of all i got so far, aside from personality) that i was hoping to use, so i was wondering if...i could do that...obviously //////;

i totally get it if i can't, though
and if it's from lack of info...i just wanted to ask before i got too attached to the idea ^///^;

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Crystal-Okami [2014-09-12 16:10:13 +0000 UTC]

just one little question....
can i do a Sentoki too? plz

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ssbbforeva In reply to Crystal-Okami [2014-09-14 18:19:10 +0000 UTC]

course you can, thanks for asking first.

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Crystal-Okami In reply to ssbbforeva [2014-09-14 18:43:34 +0000 UTC]

yay, anytime foreva!

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DummyHeart [2013-09-10 13:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Can I make a Sentoki character? :3

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ssbbforeva In reply to DummyHeart [2013-09-11 22:57:05 +0000 UTC]

certainly, just keep in mind that the whole planet and everyone on it went poof before the war with nightmare.

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DummyHeart In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-09-12 05:18:08 +0000 UTC]

Of course~

Want the link to the character when it's ready? ;D

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ssbbforeva In reply to DummyHeart [2013-09-13 13:26:39 +0000 UTC]

yes please!

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DummyHeart In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-09-20 19:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Here it is. dummyheart.deviantart.com/art/…


 I hope I didn't mess anything up...

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CaptainCanada99 [2013-07-08 15:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Could i make Sentoki OC?

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ssbbforeva In reply to CaptainCanada99 [2013-07-20 04:50:51 +0000 UTC]

sure thing, although you would have to somehow fit in the fact that the sentoki planet vanished centuries ago. maybe your sentoki is a decendant of one of the few who left the planet earlier?

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CaptainCanada99 In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-07-20 13:38:03 +0000 UTC]

already have the perfect backstory...

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Violetthefox0001 [2013-05-01 01:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Gasp! Cool, that means Bronwyn has a rare skin type XD

I really need to draw her more. This helps alot in developement. Nice job! ^^

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ssbbforeva In reply to Violetthefox0001 [2013-05-01 03:49:59 +0000 UTC]

yup!

send me a link when you got more on her

heh, thanks!

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Violetthefox0001 In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-05-02 01:23:50 +0000 UTC]

Sure thing!

No problemo

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is-kill [2013-04-30 21:30:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow. Looks like I've found another person who loves to put ridiculous detail into Kirby species. It takes a lot of effort to write all of this information. I love the bits about the individuals' tools and the battle flares. The culture is well-designed, and I like how bits of biology are touched upon while describing the flares. Well done!

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ssbbforeva In reply to is-kill [2013-04-30 22:04:42 +0000 UTC]

heh, thanks so much!

thanks for the watch, btw

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MeleStream [2013-04-29 02:59:10 +0000 UTC]

I Love your concepts about fighting Dark Matter. Dark-cutter steel, whick cuts only Dark Matter, Pure Genious! When it comes to Kirby stuff, you are my best friend and inspriation!

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ssbbforeva In reply to MeleStream [2013-04-29 19:43:29 +0000 UTC]

wow, thanks so much!

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MeleStream In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-05-01 02:25:23 +0000 UTC]

Welcom.
Hey, I'm still working on your request. I had to change the design a bit though because I couldn't get the first one to work right.

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ssbbforeva In reply to MeleStream [2013-05-01 03:27:03 +0000 UTC]

thats fine, just send me a link when you are done.

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MeleStream In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-07-06 04:58:27 +0000 UTC]

Will do!

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Dragonguardian253 [2013-04-28 16:55:48 +0000 UTC]

That is the most awesome bio of a species ever.Very well-thought of and very detailed too,very awesome!You never cease to amaze with your artwork.

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ssbbforeva In reply to Dragonguardian253 [2013-04-28 17:08:25 +0000 UTC]

wow, thanks so mcuh!

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Arrol-S [2013-04-28 05:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow, what a very large detailed bio on the species.

Thinking about it, I should do the same and work on more of my own species.

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ssbbforeva In reply to Arrol-S [2013-04-28 14:32:47 +0000 UTC]

took me all freaking day to write

send me a link when you're done

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Arrol-S In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-29 00:22:41 +0000 UTC]

It shows.

And sure.

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ssbbforeva In reply to Arrol-S [2013-04-29 01:59:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Arrol-S In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-29 03:03:44 +0000 UTC]

No prob. I want to be that detailed.

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LinkKirbyMario [2013-04-28 04:20:06 +0000 UTC]

cool, any idea on the stereotype?

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ssbbforeva In reply to LinkKirbyMario [2013-04-28 04:27:00 +0000 UTC]

stereotype? meaning racism?

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LinkKirbyMario In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-28 05:20:13 +0000 UTC]

Yes. I find having one deepens a race in a way accuail facts don't. Plus it shows what others may think of them.

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ssbbforeva In reply to LinkKirbyMario [2013-04-28 05:57:59 +0000 UTC]

well, the sentoki are a largely unknown species, having little to no interactions with the rest of the galaxy.

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LinkKirbyMario In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-28 06:07:47 +0000 UTC]

But given the fact few return from there warld, and the rages, at least some might have thought they were a violent race altogther.
But its also yours, and I do't mean to seem rude.

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ssbbforeva In reply to LinkKirbyMario [2013-04-28 14:30:17 +0000 UTC]

no, your right. i need to put something in there. i was planning on adding some more notes, anyway

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Attackrage92 [2013-04-27 22:32:28 +0000 UTC]

You've done a "fanspecies" correctly and i applaud you for that

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ssbbforeva In reply to Attackrage92 [2013-04-27 22:33:13 +0000 UTC]

heh, thanks so much!

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Attackrage92 In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-27 22:41:49 +0000 UTC]

no problem mah friend

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Substitute101 [2013-04-27 22:10:25 +0000 UTC]

awesome!you really thought out the species,huh?X3

i'd ask for one,except i kinda doubt i'd be able to use it much...it's not the drawing that's the problem(i think i would be able to),but...

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ssbbforeva In reply to Substitute101 [2013-04-27 22:32:30 +0000 UTC]

too much

well, i rarely use any of my ocs, but its just fun making them X3 you are welcome to make a sentoki

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Substitute101 In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-27 23:24:33 +0000 UTC]

ffff ok my brain convinced me to make one.(i'm still in the process right now,though)...can mine have some kind of green for her eyes and stuff?

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ssbbforeva In reply to Substitute101 [2013-04-27 23:30:50 +0000 UTC]

sure, you could have whatever you'd like, just so long as it doesnt break away to muuch from the info i posted.
dont forget, the entire planet vanished centuries ago, so you'll need an excuse to why your character is still around. maybe its ancestors left the planet and have been just wandering around ever since?

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Substitute101 In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-27 23:55:06 +0000 UTC]

alright^^
probably...but i'll come up with something for sure when this cat gets off of my leg so i can actually go over to the computer👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ssbbforeva In reply to Substitute101 [2013-04-27 23:58:45 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Substitute101 In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-28 06:46:43 +0000 UTC]

[link] you'll probably get this link again when everything's actually...donesorry

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ssbbforeva In reply to Substitute101 [2013-04-28 15:20:27 +0000 UTC]

nope, got it in time

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Substitute101 In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-28 20:24:43 +0000 UTC]

heh ok

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Substitute101 In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-28 00:00:05 +0000 UTC]

pretty much

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Substitute101 In reply to ssbbforeva [2013-04-27 22:34:18 +0000 UTC]

no such thing

i try to use all of minethanks^^

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ssbbforeva In reply to Substitute101 [2013-04-27 23:29:09 +0000 UTC]

heh, i know what you mean

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