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RoseHeart [2009-01-04 15:13:43 +0000 UTC]

She look beautiful! I love that seductive eye, the rosy cheeks and lips, and that detailed bouncy hair!! <3 It's gorgeous I envy your talent!!

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Eelynn [2008-10-02 05:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Eh,who says ure not good with painting.This is superb man!!

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AlanCross [2008-10-01 12:59:25 +0000 UTC]

I like it....nice job

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vforvengeance [2008-10-01 11:50:37 +0000 UTC]

Overall, I think this is pretty good although the colours turn out to be dull after you scanned it. Did you adjust the contrast and highlight on the scanned image?

Seriously, I think this would make a great looking graphic art if you keep the hair lines and details tidy. The overlapping white lines only make things messy and you should minimize the use of white lines for highlights.

Theme wise, it's more fantasy than glamourous. If you take a look at fashion mags' cosmetic ads, they are usually clean and sleek.

Anatomy wise, her eyes are way too big like goldfishes' and that explains the short forehead and ears being too close to the eyes. Always keep a distance about an eye length in between eyes and ears. The forehead should be about a nose-length high and don't let big eyes dictate all over the face.

Most bishie artists has problems with anatomy and facial strutures because they don't know how to draw realistic human figures and portraits. To counter that, one must first learn how to draw humans realistically before bending the rules to something else cartoony and bishie.
Keep it up

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ryuusei-illusion [2008-10-01 11:47:53 +0000 UTC]

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Ohh, this is beautiful! I thought this was done in PS before I read the comments. Ack, truely a testament to your skill~

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