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SSEJBAT In reply to hidden133 [2008-08-07 13:36:24 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much for the crits and praise! i take on board what you said but the reason i used the word ghost is to do with the picture i had in my head of the album artwork to the placebo album sleeping with ghosts![link]
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morninghasbroken [2008-08-06 13:23:26 +0000 UTC]
My favorite sentence is: "This need to write, to shape the world from a moment ".
At first I thought it said word, but world is so much better! ^_^
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Salem-rae [2008-04-26 17:51:27 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this was amazing. Fantastic work, you never cease to impress me ^~^ My favorite line would have to be "But my bones feel to heavy for the sky". Again, wow. Fantastic work ^~^ There was a couple of spelling mistakes here and there, but the flow of the poem, and the vocabulary chosen was perfection ^~^
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Salem-rae In reply to SSEJBAT [2008-04-27 05:00:01 +0000 UTC]
lol! not at all ^~^ i loved it!!
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