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SSEJBAT — Never Far Away...

Published: 2006-07-24 22:02:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description The daemons
Came to play tonight,
Their silent rasping (just imagined?) breath
Playing tricks with the tingles on the back of my neck,
Never quite forgotten,

Never quite extinguished
They still flit like moth to flame,
Drawn, in a world where pathetic fallacy
And the pathetic whims of mankind combine,
To paint our stale emotion 'cross the sky,

Like the briefest summer night time
Feigning blackness after sunset,
Calls the chilled breath of wind through my window
Never failing to remind that
Winter's never far away...
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Comments: 21

Lisa-Hazza [2006-07-27 11:52:41 +0000 UTC]

Faved.
Very good work.

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SSEJBAT In reply to Lisa-Hazza [2006-08-02 16:47:21 +0000 UTC]

cheers!

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vampyrdevil [2006-07-26 17:39:25 +0000 UTC]

oooh this is realllly good

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SSEJBAT In reply to vampyrdevil [2006-08-04 23:17:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks! its a pity though i dont seem able to write rhymers, meh i think i will have another go...

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vampyrdevil In reply to SSEJBAT [2006-08-06 16:55:55 +0000 UTC]

cool go for it!
yer i've had trouble with rhyming recently

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SSEJBAT In reply to vampyrdevil [2006-08-06 20:53:06 +0000 UTC]

i did but i dont like it! even with different styles everything seems samey...
oh well!

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vampyrdevil In reply to SSEJBAT [2006-08-07 19:26:36 +0000 UTC]

bleh lol

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Redscream [2006-07-25 15:32:57 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty and kind of dreamy...
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SSEJBAT In reply to Redscream [2006-08-04 23:10:49 +0000 UTC]

cheers! i really cant spell :stupid me:

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element-of-use [2006-07-25 14:14:27 +0000 UTC]

ooh i like i like. It's cool. Especially the " to paint out stale emotion" part
Bravo

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SSEJBAT In reply to element-of-use [2006-08-04 23:04:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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autumn-wind [2006-07-25 12:57:34 +0000 UTC]

And the pathetic whims of mankind combine,
To paint our stale emotion 'cross the sky,

i totally love this. <3
so what theme does this belong to?

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SSEJBAT In reply to autumn-wind [2006-08-04 22:59:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks! rem..no way out!

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SSEJBAT In reply to autumn-wind [2006-08-04 22:56:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks! theme? ah its no way out!

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autumn-wind In reply to SSEJBAT [2006-08-05 02:09:21 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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NeoxFlame [2006-07-25 00:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Great flow.

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SSEJBAT In reply to NeoxFlame [2006-07-25 01:06:18 +0000 UTC]

cheers! did you see that with 3 verses or 2? just curious as there was only 2 and i just added the middle one!

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NeoxFlame In reply to SSEJBAT [2006-07-25 07:13:39 +0000 UTC]

think it was 3. Wouldn't make too much difference tho - it rocked all the same!

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SSEJBAT In reply to NeoxFlame [2006-08-04 22:54:59 +0000 UTC]

cheers!

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ParabolicPhoton [2006-07-24 22:11:17 +0000 UTC]

quite good.
Your imagery is excellent.

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SSEJBAT In reply to ParabolicPhoton [2006-07-25 00:25:50 +0000 UTC]

heh im glad you think so, personally if i cant improve it im demoting it! just a few lines that came to me in the spur of the moment. i think its fairly crap although i like the idea!

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