DirtySeagulls [2011-03-31 14:46:05 +0000 UTC]
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I really like this - I like the colors you used and your choice of where to put in the dark black, like on the bottom of the hair. The eyes are really pointed in a good direction too, it isn't like she is looking at the viewer but looking next to them almost.The dark outline around it all really makes it stand out to me, and same with the red almost glowing border around her. I would say you really captured the whole scene look, with the dark make up and colorful and wild hair and even the earrings are a nice touch as well.The one thing I would say is it looks like you got maybe a little lazy coloring in the hair, but it's not too noticeable and it still looks fantastic e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>Overall I would say you did a very nice job with the outline, choice of colors, and capturing the whole "scene" look e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Very well done.
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star-shine335 In reply to DirtySeagulls [2011-04-01 21:35:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you i really appreciate you taking the time to write a critique for me its really great to know what i have to improve on
DirtySeagulls In reply to star-shine335 [2011-04-01 21:38:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh no problem You are welcome, it looks very nice
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0xdragonsrockx0 [2013-04-21 20:22:29 +0000 UTC]
i love it!
himebanana [2011-04-03 08:30:21 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! Her eyes are just wow!
star-shine335 In reply to himebanana [2011-04-03 11:56:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
enixyy [2011-03-20 03:54:53 +0000 UTC]
it looks very good
star-shine335 In reply to enixyy [2011-03-20 13:57:19 +0000 UTC]
thanks
GraceTheArtist [2011-03-19 16:32:32 +0000 UTC]
Awesone!
star-shine335 In reply to GraceTheArtist [2011-03-19 16:35:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks