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AlyssaFoxah [2016-07-07 04:25:46 +0000 UTC]
In her history, it says her daughter's name is Mary. But in her family list, it says Anne??
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StarlightEspy In reply to AlyssaFoxah [2016-07-07 04:29:44 +0000 UTC]
oh, thank you for pointing that out. I honestly didn't notice that until now..
thank you
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to StarlightEspy [2016-07-07 04:30:47 +0000 UTC]
I was just confused lol I saw it had said her mother was named Mary and was like "???"
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StarlightEspy In reply to AlyssaFoxah [2016-07-07 04:32:27 +0000 UTC]
yeah i guess that kinda slipped past me at the time lol
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Untraceablemystic [2015-05-14 19:02:15 +0000 UTC]
I really like this character. she has a unique design, is well thought out, has a personality I can really get behind and understand, and she has a unique and interesting weapon.She was really well done.
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F1NL3Y [2015-02-11 04:12:07 +0000 UTC]
i love her ; v ;
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B3GIN [2015-02-11 03:37:53 +0000 UTC]
Nice job with this! I really like that this is an older exorcist. Those are somewhat rare to come by in any fandom. 8D It's always cool to see a wide variety of age groups.
She sounds like she's got a really interesting, well thought out personality as well. It's really cool that you've pointed out the potential problems that her more abrasive traits can have, especially with things like getting in trouble due to stubbornness. And it's definitely understandable that she'd have a softer spot for the younger exorcists. That was a nice detail to add in.
Interesting innocence concept you have there, too. The fact that the shock of lightning paralyzes akuma rather than destroying them was really creative. (It makes sense with them being machines and everything, and considering they are made of dark matter, lightning caused by innocence would probably cause some real damage to their systems. But then again any sort of lightning would probably cause damage. xD Sorry if I just assumed too much on my part for the innocence design. It just sounds really fascinating!). It would be cool to see some expansion on her innocence, although that decision is entirely up to you.
The outfit design is nice and fashionable, but it's cool how modest everything is. And amigosh I really love the casual outfit you have for her. It makes me think of her farmer background. OwO Probably because of the earthy colors? Lol I'm not sure. But everything looks really nice!
Great job with you fan character! She's awesome! ^^
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