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Starshine1225 — I Never Blamed You
Published: 2011-06-19 02:32:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 972; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 7
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Mousefur went to the edge of the camp, to get away from everything that just happened. Longtail was dead, and she believes it was all her fault. She looked up into the sky and cried. She whispered, "I'm sorry Longtail, I'm sorry. It was all my fault."She opened her eyes to see the starry Shape of Longtail. He looked young again, and held out his paw to Mousefur. He whispered "I never blamed You Mousefur." She looked awya and smiled, knowing that Longtail didn't blame her. It made her at her happiest.---
WHAT CHA THINK OF THAT
SOME LONGXMOUSE FANART
rly if u guys can't see it i can SEE ALL OF IT
now listen
The picture
was drawn all on MS Paint
the all the shade and such (including the rockwall) was made with MyPaint
But this shows how skilled i am with MS Paint
anyway
Programs -
MS Paint for the pic
MyPaint for the shade and Rockwall
All this was drawn with a mouse
Enjoy
and commentttt~~
oh and plz crit it^^
pweaseeeeeee
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Comments: 30
PROS!!! YAY!!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
'Kay, so, I love how you did the "ghosliness" of Longtail, I thikn that's the one. I also like the shadign and wall.
I love how happy Mousetail or whatever her anem looks, the tears of hapiness on her face.
I like hhow you outlined Longtail in white and made him all glow-y using the spraypaint tool.
CONS. BOO.
I really odn't think there's anythign wrong with this piece, really. Your anatomy is wonderful, and the grass looks nice.
Anyway, those were more pros.
All I can really say is good work.
I know there may be some places you can work on that I'm just not seeing now, but let others get them please.
Star out.
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thank you
even tho for some reason i am kinda starting to not like this picture
xD
oh well
at least i know ppl still like it
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the only thing i think you could work on is paws,
paws are hard and it took me a while to get it,
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oh
i used to have a diferent paw style
i like this one much much better
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yesss. longtail. i luffles him. such a dynamic character. and mousfur's expression is priceless. I LUUFLES THIS PIC.
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thanks you so much
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That us epic. IN PPAIN! AHDYNFFISN!!!!!!Epic skills, dude!
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I mean Paint XD I saw paint and spazzed on the keyboard, so there was are typo lol
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lol
yea
all done on paint the edited
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@Spottedleafe21
There are ALWAYS flaws in an art piece.
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nmmmm
she thinkas there isn't
and i know theres some
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