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Adelegamer [2020-12-30 15:36:47 +0000 UTC]
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Covianna [2017-12-17 19:46:59 +0000 UTC]
pretty well done!
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mpandainsilk [2017-04-25 00:34:54 +0000 UTC]
Nice prop.
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FNAFNIGHTCORE1987 [2017-01-04 01:39:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh フフフ
I just got an idea. It includes this crib, something and something else~
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Lumiaymiel [2016-10-31 01:41:47 +0000 UTC]
the password?
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Sora-Light-Key [2016-09-24 12:37:14 +0000 UTC]
thank you for editing this!!!! I needed it!!!!!!!!
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SteelDollS In reply to Sora-Light-Key [2016-09-24 14:41:25 +0000 UTC]
Yay! That makes me very happy, thank you! ^^
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SteelDollS In reply to Sora-Light-Key [2016-09-25 18:02:00 +0000 UTC]
That sounds like it has a really cute story behind it. Do you write stories, too, as well as MMD?
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Sora-Light-Key In reply to SteelDollS [2016-09-25 18:38:05 +0000 UTC]
yes I do ^^ I made one if you want to read it ^^
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SteelDollS In reply to Sora-Light-Key [2016-09-29 05:43:45 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, it's adorable! xD
If you like constructive criticism, I do have a suggestion. It is related to the format layout, rather than to the writing.
If you break up your story into paragraphs, it is easier for the eye to follow, so more people can read it. Paragraphs should be between 2-5 sentences usually... unless sentences seem very long. Every time a different person speaks with "" (quotation marks), a new paragraph should also be begun, if following that type of formatting. It makes it visually nice to read.
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MarinKoi [2016-09-09 09:13:46 +0000 UTC]
cutee~
also you're getting so good at mmd stuff
I'd like to download but-
my computer broke a few days ago >.<
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SteelDollS In reply to MarinKoi [2016-09-09 20:56:38 +0000 UTC]
Awww thanks ;w; I'm actually pretty amazed at my promotion from ultranoob to extreme beginner :')
NOOOO D:
COMPUTER!
WE NEED
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YaminDarkKnights [2016-09-08 19:55:42 +0000 UTC]
oh wow ty for make is heheXD
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