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Snoop-Katt [2009-11-04 21:13:47 +0000 UTC]

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I would like to critique this if you don't mind. :3

I must say, this is pretty darn good for a Moose, I love the way you put in so much detail but yet again, the amount of detail you attempted to put in, kinda made it look sloppy.

I love the lighting, it has a powerfull, strong look and sense to it.
The horns/antlers are pretty well done too, pitty they covered up his eyes though.

And also, I must say, he's a little fat for a moose, maybe make his stomch less big and round. Because if you look at photo's of good healthy moose, you'll see their stomch goes round and up again. Showing their fit and healthy.

I'll have to say that my favrioute part is the neck fur, that's th part that catches most of the attention.

Other than all that, great job. Keep the good work up. :3

~Yael.C
P.S: Sorry if this critique sucked or if I sounded naty or harsh in anyway.

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intangiance [2009-11-10 23:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Yes, the eye seems to have gotten a little lost, and nose lacks definition somewhat. However, I must agree that it is for the most part a great drawing, and the care taken in the neck and antlers really is superb

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