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SoraNoRyu [2010-09-06 12:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank You ^^
It looks awesome now <3

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SoraNoRyu [2010-09-04 18:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Aww~ I'm afraid I did find some mistakes again Can't blame you for that, though, I know those were difficult lines. I constantly got confused myself while drawing them...

-Feenstaubs eye looks a bit strange; there should be a light reflex at the top and a small one at the bottom of it, the rest should be blue.
-One of the plate things on her cheek is still half pink; it should be yellow like the rest
-the thing right under her pullover and next to the upper rib should be another rib rather than skin; it should be white
- ther is another bone and some flesh showing on her left hind foot between the fur

-under Zuckerherz' left antennae, ther is a small red space that should be black
-the bandage on his paw should also be mostly white

While you're at it, you could also change the color of the stitches so they stand out a little more, although that isn't neccesary.

Like I said, I'm terribly sorry I'm making you change so much >_<
The overall color looks so awesome!
I especially like how you did the belt and the hooves. And Zuckerherz's nose looks really nice too ^^ so shiny...


And I just realized Feenstaubs ears are diffently long. Why didn't I notice that before I lined it?

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