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Supach — Separate flights
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Published: 2019-09-04 07:55:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 754; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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For the Heavens

could no longer wait.

So they sent a giant plane

to fly you off to paradise

and bring you to their gates.

I stood beside your dying bed

with the sound droning in my ears

I told you "It´s your flight my love

so  you should  show  no fear.

For just as soon as it could be

I´d book a follow-on flight

 then we´ll be together

this time Eternally."





Suzanne  04.09 2019

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Comments: 33

SWSKraven [2021-08-06 17:54:14 +0000 UTC]

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Supach In reply to SWSKraven [2021-08-07 04:40:58 +0000 UTC]

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FountainsOfMars [2020-05-17 16:17:44 +0000 UTC]

Touching and precious and sad and lovely..
❤

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Supach In reply to FountainsOfMars [2020-05-17 16:48:19 +0000 UTC]

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FountainsOfMars In reply to Supach [2020-05-17 16:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes. I believed it.

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SueJO [2020-02-28 13:03:15 +0000 UTC]

Touching

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Supach In reply to SueJO [2020-02-28 14:38:32 +0000 UTC]

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vanndra [2019-09-27 10:09:12 +0000 UTC]

 

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Supach In reply to vanndra [2019-09-27 10:51:41 +0000 UTC]

     

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vanndra In reply to Supach [2019-09-27 13:11:21 +0000 UTC]

 

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MadRabbitComix [2019-09-06 11:55:51 +0000 UTC]

Heartbreaking, yet beautiful. The thought of losing a loved one is so hard to grasp in  in life,  this analogy is touching. I'm very sorry for your loss. I too had to experience this a few years ago .

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Supach In reply to MadRabbitComix [2019-09-06 12:13:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for reading , it´s actually a true story   I am so sorry for your loss 

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MadRabbitComix In reply to Supach [2019-09-06 21:24:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you  

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FallenAngelGM [2019-09-05 19:01:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Such a passionate poem! But sad as well.
My condolences if it was meant for a departed loved one.

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Supach In reply to FallenAngelGM [2019-09-05 19:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much : Yes I´m afraid it is. I have been writing my grief out of my soul since my husband died almost 6 years ago.The majority of my writing  is of this nature and has helped me to cope with over whelming feelings of sadness.

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FallenAngelGM In reply to Supach [2019-09-05 20:14:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm really sorry for your loss. It's never easy and I can't say I understand such close loss. But I am certain that he's always there spiritually watching over you. 

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Supach In reply to FallenAngelGM [2019-09-05 20:23:40 +0000 UTC]

 Thank you

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IRIS-KUPP [2019-09-05 18:46:26 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of the song Leaving on a Jet Plane {John Denver] 
Sad but beautifully said, this is a wonderful poem Suzanne.   

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Supach In reply to IRIS-KUPP [2019-09-05 18:59:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Iris  

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HonestScribe [2019-09-05 16:27:55 +0000 UTC]

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Supach In reply to HonestScribe [2019-09-05 16:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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VenomousFlame1 [2019-09-05 15:50:23 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem, I can relate to this one. I lost a loved one this year too. I love the analogy to planes.

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Supach In reply to VenomousFlame1 [2019-09-05 15:58:41 +0000 UTC]

I am so sorry for your loss. I lost my husband nearly 6 years ago and on the night he passed this actually happened. The plane was so loud It shook my body to the core and I knew it was for him, his time to go. His death still hurts like hell and sometimes even now my sorrow gets the better of me.

Thanks for reading, hope it could bring some comfort

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VenomousFlame1 In reply to Supach [2019-09-05 16:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh geez, so the plane analogy wasn't just an analogy. But in a way that makes the poem even more beautiful and sad.


Stay strong, the pain is overwhelming but he'll always be waiting for you when you take your plane trip back to his side

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Supach In reply to VenomousFlame1 [2019-09-05 16:49:39 +0000 UTC]

  thank you so much  

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LadyPleiades [2019-09-04 22:13:45 +0000 UTC]

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Supach In reply to LadyPleiades [2019-09-05 05:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Trish

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LadyPleiades In reply to Supach [2019-09-07 22:23:03 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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Nostalgialover808 [2019-09-04 11:42:06 +0000 UTC]

 

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Supach In reply to Nostalgialover808 [2019-09-04 13:10:56 +0000 UTC]

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LoonaLucy [2019-09-04 11:23:55 +0000 UTC]

 So traurig und gefühlvoll und liebevoll  

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Supach In reply to LoonaLucy [2019-09-04 13:10:40 +0000 UTC]

Ich danke dir

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LoonaLucy In reply to Supach [2019-09-04 18:10:51 +0000 UTC]

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