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SecretWalrus [2007-01-19 10:45:34 +0000 UTC]

make it better?
well, i'm a freak for cloth and hair so don't get me started...
one basic thing to start working on though that will make a difference akin to that between napalm and iced tea. In other words, it's a big difference, with line quality.
by that i mean just the thin and thick of your lines. Some lines should be thin, and others should be thick, and it's when you start getting lines that change thickness you can start accentuating curves and the like. i see you've got it working a little bit in the face, but i'm also assuming that's cuz it's small details
for your piece:
first, wispies in the hair should be thin
as should any of the folds in the clothes
other small examples would be, in the bra-type thing, have the lines on the bottom be thicker than the top, makes a fakish lightsource and attempts to give them form, same with areas like the arms, have the lines thicker where the curves are most extreme
one other thing that'll make your picture look better than sex is balance in the figure's pose. i still don't have that down myself, but gesture REALLY helps
hell i could keep going... if ye like i could help ya with drawing in person seein as we go the same college or somethin. Just let me know, i feel like i've got so much freetime now that i'm on 15 credits

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