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Drawlia1 [2019-04-06 19:28:32 +0000 UTC]
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So what do I think The first thing I noticed was the girl on the left, which might have been because of the warm comforting colors. I really loved the details on her neck, and how It really gives dimension as If she was really alive and a breathing human. You must have studied a lot about light and colors because of the theqnuiques you used, and also some innovative ones such as how the girl on the lefts lips and eyes shines with different hues and colors, and really draw someone in. Not adding too much detail to the shoulders are great since you are leading the eyes to the face, which is the part that is most defined thing to remember that the color pure white or pure black is not to be used, unless It was your intention and your style, go with it e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> The reason why is because of the style approach you are achieving which Is a bit more semirealistic one. The nose and the lips as amazing, and the eyes too. One thing I want you to try, is to revert the picture, look at it from the opposite angle. It really helps you to see It from a different perspectiveThe girl on the right has very symmetrical eyes, which I like. One thing I can pinpoint that would make It better is to avoid using thick pure black on the eyes, since It creates a certain intensity between the whites in the eyes and the black around It that makes It look more Cartoonish. The nose, the lips, and the clothes are realistic and smooth looking, which contrasts to the eyes. Keeping a balance Is the key to Improving It.
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SuperGalaxyFox In reply to Drawlia1 [2019-04-06 20:17:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique!
For the record i am flipping the canvas horizontally,it's a great way of seeing mistakes that you usually don't see,and i agree with the statement that you shouldn't use pure black for realistic paintings,but here i didn't use it that much,i used mostly dark brown for the eyes of the girl on the left and dark blue for the one on the right.
It makes me really happy to see that people enjoy my art! and that you again for the critique!
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SuperGalaxyFox In reply to dtjay [2019-04-06 16:12:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique!
I do have issues with expressions,even when i used references i found on Pinterest i still couldn't get them the way i wanted,had a version of them looking at each other but that just looked creepy to me.
And about the girl on the right,i did make a lot of changes to her face,ended up making her face shorter like in the drawing,but i don't get the things about the lips needing to be lower,looks alright by me,but i get where you are coming from!
Again,thank you for the critique,really helps me out! Have a nice day!
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dtjay In reply to SuperGalaxyFox [2019-04-06 18:29:29 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! This was the first critique I ever made and I am so happy I helped you!
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