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Typography Iยดm working on right now. Not really pleased with the composition yet since the "&" is too far apart from "Chocolate".Related content
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I always love typo ... and u already master it ... hail brother
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I'd love for you to do a time-lapse video for your process...
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Yeah that I would like to see as well
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I'm thinking the first "s" in sweets need something... it was a bit invisible to me at first. Perhaps if it was more solid... and the bottom half was smaller... this would also allow you to move that "&" in a bit.
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Yes i agree, But I wanted the initials bigger to point out BS&C. But you have a good point and that would solve the composition.
Thanks
Martin
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If that's the case, I think the "S" needs to be much closer to the "B" than it is... with the "&" and the "chocolates" a little more separated". This almost reads as "Belgian & Sweets Chocolates".
I'm NO expert in typography... so forgive me... but I think you might benefit from laying out your compositions digitally before attacking them with your awesome freehand. Even using the simplest word-processing program (though I think Illustrator or Photoshop would do it... which I think you have), you'd be able to grasp the layout much better before you spend so much time sketching, which is not always easy to edit.
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All righty then 
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No probz 
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You could merge the ยซSยป and the ยซ&ยป into one glyph.
This is kick ass work by the way.
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Thank you very much, appreciate it
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YOU NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME! That client doesnt know what they are missing!
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Thank you kindly bud, appreciate it
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Ridiculously clean. I'm in love with this type, hands down
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Thank you kindly, appreciate it
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Thank you, appreciate it
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Thank you kindly, unfortunately this one got rejected
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looks dope and you can always adjust the '&' placement in illustrator.
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this is really cool! i love the way it looks. i dont think anything should be changed but i can see where you are coming from wanting to fix the "&" but as i said i dont think anything should be done differently.
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Thank you, appreciate it!
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Looks realy cool. But indeed, at a first glance I did not even notice the S in Sweets and the &. But I'm shure you'r gonna fix that in no time
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wow....the C of chocolate looks like a E
but wow nice work!!!!
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Oh, great and sweet - I know that composition will be finally great....I like typo of Chocolates and Belgian...
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