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swah87 — Set me free

Published: 2004-10-27 03:45:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 158; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description heart of stone
rage of fire
lies that burn
one desire

thoughts of acid
pouring down
acting wicked
tears that drown

knowledge of light
newly given
of everything you
have ever hidden

walk with pride
down the empty halls
silencing cries
as I start to fall

panicking mind
of never again
I mean it this time
no, NEVER again

stubborn refusal
with any plea
finally smiling
you set me free
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Comments: 19

HidoiBakemono [2004-11-07 05:35:38 +0000 UTC]

it confuses me?

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swah87 In reply to HidoiBakemono [2004-11-07 05:40:43 +0000 UTC]

it's supposed to be the confusing workings of the mind.

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HidoiBakemono In reply to swah87 [2004-11-07 05:41:47 +0000 UTC]

oh

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swah87 In reply to HidoiBakemono [2004-11-07 05:46:32 +0000 UTC]

what stanza would you like to know about though?

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HidoiBakemono In reply to swah87 [2004-11-07 05:47:38 +0000 UTC]

ASLKHDKJFHKLH what? what? wat? im so confused....stanza???????

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swah87 In reply to HidoiBakemono [2004-11-07 05:53:23 +0000 UTC]

a stanza is the different groups of lines... you have a line:

lajdf;lkja;lfjl

or a stanza:

a;lkfdja;slkd
a;sdlfalsdkj
asdfj;dskj

as;dfkjjl;kjasf
asldkfj;asdjf

Etc.

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HidoiBakemono In reply to swah87 [2004-11-07 05:57:40 +0000 UTC]

oh

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HidoiBakemono In reply to swah87 [2004-11-07 05:57:14 +0000 UTC]

oh

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swah87 In reply to HidoiBakemono [2004-11-07 06:04:57 +0000 UTC]

is there anything you'd want explained?

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HidoiBakemono In reply to swah87 [2004-11-07 06:06:23 +0000 UTC]

no

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swah87 In reply to HidoiBakemono [2004-11-07 06:11:36 +0000 UTC]

k then.

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Happytimes-77 [2004-11-05 16:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is a quite impressive work here. I'm astonished at how much it's set apart from your other pieces. Well-worded, great natural rythm, excellent imagery... I love it.

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swah87 In reply to Happytimes-77 [2004-11-06 08:20:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you . I noticed that it was a bit different too, and after I wrote it I couldn't come up with any reason why except passion. I was angry, feeling destructive... maybe that is the key. Thank you so much for the fave . I'll attempt more, but I need the inspiration to do so again (and lately I've been happy).

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Happytimes-77 In reply to swah87 [2004-11-08 18:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Uhm, it's easy to write when you're angry. What I've found the hardest, is to write when I'm happy... but that's also exactly where I've found some of my personal-favorites as far as my own writing is concerned.

Either way, I'm sure you'll continue to do great things in your writing.

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swah87 In reply to Happytimes-77 [2004-11-09 02:38:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you, and I agree, happy is difficult.

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Nienalleine07 [2004-10-27 03:48:07 +0000 UTC]

I love it.. Just like i told you. You've got so much talent sarah.. I'm glad that i gave you inspiration, because otherwise, i would have never got to hear/read the happy side of your poetry.. rock on, keep up the good work!!! :hugs:

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swah87 In reply to Nienalleine07 [2004-10-27 04:00:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much ! You're great! I'm so glad you love it.

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Nienalleine07 In reply to swah87 [2004-10-27 04:05:12 +0000 UTC]

i do!!!! no prob!

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swah87 In reply to Nienalleine07 [2004-10-27 04:13:27 +0000 UTC]

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