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Description Taken in the conservatory in Roath Park, Cardiff.

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Comments: 12

Psychothrone [2011-06-22 21:24:59 +0000 UTC]

As mentioned before, cropping just a tiny bit of the top and bottom should work in the picture's favor, I guess.
Anyway, very nice shot in many terms: Colours, lighting, vibrance are great
Since this is (kind-of) macro photography, I'd have liked to also see the focus just that bit more "perfect" - the image doesn't seem 100% sharp (like 97% - so still very sharp, of course ). Would that be the focus, or a tiny bit of camera shake? Or maybe this is a totally unsharpened shot?
Oh, and I just realize that the way the "lines" in the leaf are aligned works really well, so the perspective is well-chosen.
Nice one! (:

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Swordblade In reply to Psychothrone [2011-06-25 09:13:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

I see what you mean about the focus. I'm pretty proud of it because it's the first time I've got anything like this so nice, but it could do with being a *little* sharper. I think it's probably a mixture of focus and the fact that I don't have any decent photo software to sharpen it up in. I still have to wrangle with my camera to get it to take decent close-ups.

Glad you like it though!

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marygrew [2011-06-20 01:18:03 +0000 UTC]

This is a very interesting shot. I love the way the water droplets stand out from the leaf. Both the top right and bottom right corners are a bit distracting. I would recommend altering one of those so that the eye can flow throughout the entire photo easily. The shades of green are brilliant, as is the texture of the leaf. Beautiful work.

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Swordblade In reply to marygrew [2011-06-20 08:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it.

I see what you mean about the right corners though, the vein at the top and the slight shadow at the bottom, right? They kind of distract the eye. I'll try and crop it down slightly and see how that looks.

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robotponey [2011-06-18 22:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Interesting shoot, it must have been taken under daylight wich is hard to get the rigth ligth and dark proportion in this case it seems to be working well. The subtile line of the leaf create an interesting pattern broken by the water drop. The only thing i think you could have donne better is use the main line of the leaf to help support the smaller one going from a corner to the middel or straighten the on in the center, but over it is a pretty good shoot good job!

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Swordblade In reply to robotponey [2011-06-20 08:52:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much for the comments, I'll try and line it up better next time!

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Ellie0 [2011-06-13 12:04:31 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!! Great detail and great shot

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Swordblade In reply to Ellie0 [2011-06-13 13:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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QuantumYiN [2011-06-13 10:19:35 +0000 UTC]

This makes me thirsty for some reason

I really like it!

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Swordblade In reply to QuantumYiN [2011-06-13 10:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Hah, I know what you mean! And thanks!

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VBarts [2011-06-13 10:15:20 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful!

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Swordblade In reply to VBarts [2011-06-13 10:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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