brandrificus [2010-11-23 00:34:40 +0000 UTC]
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You have requested a critiqwue of this artwork , by placing it in the "critique me" folder at a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/o/f⌠" alt=" " title="FotoManipulationz"/> . The concept that you've created here is really cool. The whole emotion of fight or flight is very well pronounced in the artwork .I am compelledo to run from this psycotic temptress , or perhaps run to her for protection from some unseen hidious beast.She definately looks evil , with the horns protuding from her head and the blood oozing from her mouth , but she also leaves the viewer with a sense of wretched sadness having the mascara running down her face. Very intriquing indeed. I also like the bit of madness you've created in the scene. The bulging eyes , flailing hair and ribbons ,and the ravens add to the insanity quite nicely. All in all your choice of stocks is great for the heroic legacy you have tried to create in the scene.
Unfortunately , the painted hair and makeup stand out far to much to maintain the flow of the piece , therefore ruining it's over all appeal. There is no depth or shading on the hair strands so , although the color contrast is great , it is flat and too strange against the realistic nature of the rest of this model (the always lovely `Elandria ) and scene.
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