Epidemic93 [2009-06-27 16:10:52 +0000 UTC]
I think its a great start for a good picture. Needs a little bit more time put into it.
1. You are looking at the back side of the meteors which are in front of a star. This would be a blinding light with almost completely black specs in front of it. Maybe black out the meteors and add a little bit of light around the inside edges. The same goes with the planets in the background. You wouldn't be able to see the backsides at all.
2. The light edges on the planets has a strange grey / yellow color to it. This can be corrected by doing 2 brushed layers the same color as your sun. Just place them on top of your shadow layer. both layers at 50% opacity or so, one set to color dodge, and the other one set to linear dodge. This will give a nice bright lighting effect.
3. A little contrast increase in the sun and background would look nice.
Great start just needs a few details, and it could be a great picture.
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