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taivalsin — Mark of a traitor
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Published: 2015-07-22 21:24:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1262; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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"After several hours Lorcan finally woke up. The place looked unfamiliar , it was like from a dream he had. He then realised that he had been there before, and the horror showed up on his pale face; he had been left to the ground. Lorcan tried to get up but he couldn`t - the pain was too strong. He dragged himself to a small pond and looked at his reflection, and then started to cry; his eyes, they had taken his his sky blue eyes. Blue eyes were the ultimate mark of purity and honor, and now they were replaced with filthy satanic red. Lorcan rubbed water against his face over and over and over again, but the red didn`t wore off. His wings had discolored black from the mould which smell he used to love. Now it was disgusting , obnoxious and dire. He screamed with a voice so strong it echoed all over to the throne of his Father and his beloved past home. " No no no, this can`t be happening to me ! " Lorcan yelled in panic " somebody, anybody, help me ! "Read the rest of the story here:
Finally it`s finished. It didn`t come out exactly as I wanted to, but I`ll take it.
No need to point out any anatomy mistakes, I`m way too tired to fix anything at the moment.
Lorcan the broken angel and art (c) me
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Comments: 14
I think I've just read all of his backgroundstory you have here so far!
And maaaan, this is SUCH an interesting plot!! * - *
I LOVE your way of writing btw!! <3 It's so awesome!!
Aahh, I think I might want to read the whole story one day... ; u ;
I really want more now! xD
May I ask where you've gotten inspiration from for your epic story..? c:
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Thank you soo much, it means a lot! :,> I like creating backstorie, and it's awesome to hear that you think so ! 
His story is slowly evolving, it still needs a little polishing. The story is missing a part where my other character Vaiva meets him and cures his wounds. Then Lorcan is headed on a journey to seek the notorious demon lord Geryon to his hands, with a hope that he might get his wings back through black magic.
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It's my pleasure! ^v^
It really is such a cool story! Thanks for sharing a bit more of the information you had with me! ^o^ <3
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Täst tuli about viis kertaa hienompi ku mitä ajattelin täst tulevan (ei, en ajatellu et täst tulis edes mitenkään meh-näköinen) XD
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xD no siinä tapauksessa kiitos ! <3
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the expression is so well done! i love the reflection in the water especially~
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Very nicely done!! and the glow in his eyes i feel like he is showing actual panic, its a very lovely piece. The story is cool to
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Thank you, it means a lot!
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that looks awesome! <3 and the short story thing in the desc. is really cool, too.
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Thank you so much !
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