emilyrln [2010-11-05 01:25:07 +0000 UTC]
LOVE the curve of the treeline! It gives me the sense that H&G are in a clearing but surrounded by the woods, that the trees are closing in... it also makes a kind of creepy smile, with word-bubbles for eyes... Also love the darker tone on the "...for good" bubble, like she's whispering, and the corner-placement reinforces that for me. The broken flower-chain is nice, too: the fun and games are over, and only traces linger. Also Hansel in shadow: foreshadowing? Too many shadows in that sentence, urk!
*has to ask* is that strawberry jam from a picnic lunch, or berry juice from scavinging food? Or is it something more... sinister? *gulps*
Clearly I've had too many critique sessions! I start analyzing things, lol. Love seeing your work, though! *is inspired to make things, but after dinner*
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