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Published: 2005-12-29 01:26:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description I want to scream.
To cry.
To bash something up till theres nothing left.
Theres a demon inside me thrashing about,
It wants to wreak havoc on the world.
I crawl into a corner,
And hug my knees to my chest.
I don't want it to come out,
Even though the pain of it will be over.
© (copywrite) Madeleine Balmbra
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Comments: 3

animearchangel [2005-12-30 10:39:51 +0000 UTC]

i think "to cry" should be in the first line w/a coma. and the 3line doesnt flow as well with the rest. good ideas as usual and concepts

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Tamaris-Moon In reply to animearchangel [2005-12-31 14:55:37 +0000 UTC]

k ty

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animearchangel In reply to Tamaris-Moon [2005-12-31 21:09:25 +0000 UTC]

np

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