baneofloslorien5384 [2019-10-31 00:24:34 +0000 UTC]
If I had to sum up this pic in a single phrase, I suspect it would be ad infinitum.
...well, I could leave it at that, but brevity has always been my weak point.
Overall, though this was a complicated and demanding project, I'd say you rose to the occasion admirably. Despite not being the intended focus of the fic, you did a fine job drawing the mangled menfolk. Hayato's bruises, scab, and broken sandal strap, Hinata's torn hakama (right term?), Benny's chest plate being cracked, how one of his poleyns (knee guard) is cracked and the other having fallen off, and Arthur's armor looking downright un-salvageable fits how I imagined them to come back from their ill-fated get together while planning the fic with . So ditto for their expressions. Arthur and Benny's in particular underscores just how ridiculous the whole situation was.
Moving on to the those hogging the spotlight, in more ways than one , You also did great with the ladies. The varied poses, some remonstrative and others amused, pairs nicely with how contrite and embarrassed their husbands look. And, despite some hiccups we encountered, and which you compensated for quite nicely, you did very well with their sizes. Nyx wears the butterball look quite well, with that sack of a gut and those thick thighs. Peri has a fine pear shape with those huge thighs and pot belly. You did a fine job giving Rinkah the strong-fat look, with that huge, but tight gut and those thick limbs. Kagero looks quite impressive, and more than a bit dangerous, with those rolls and those...I'm not sure, but I'm guessing EE or maybe FF cups? Regardless, you also did will with Orochi's big gut and bust.
The various detailing you put on the ladies is also excellent. Aside from their expressions, the way you had Kagero bespangled with marble dust from her sculpting, those sweat stains on Nyx's robes, and Orochi's flushed and sweaty appearance augment this pic splendidly, and you also did great on their clothes. And, last but not least, the background is phenomenal. You did an awesome job adapting those refs on feudal Japanese interiors. The designs on the walls and the patterns on the floors also show a keen eye for detail and precision. That easel with the work-in-progress is also a nice touch, and showcases your skill, as it must've been tricky to add in a small, partial image and then draw a covering over a good portion of it.
All in all, this was well worth the wait...weight...whatever, and I'm glad you got as much out of it as I did. Thanks so much, and I hope your Watchers share my appreciation.
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