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Published: 2018-01-08 18:20:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 585; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 1
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I don't have skin color markers so I made it monochromeRelated content
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Lookin' good man! Real solid attention to detail here. I'd encourage you to think about how a hand wraps around a cylinder for her scythe holding hand, and if you can, try not to crop figures at the joint. Her left hand, (our right) is covered by the scythe at the wrist, and that can create some visual confusion, so just a minor thing to think about when doing your composition.
Again real solid, you're certainly coming along!
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this is very helpful but what do you mean by crop at the joint
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If you are covering part of the body, as you are with the scythe, try not to do so at naturally occurring anatomical breaks, such as the wrist, ankle, knee etc. It can make the composition a little awkward to read visually. While this a commonly cited composition "rule," there are no real rules when it comes to art, so feel free to disregard. Hope this clears it up!Β
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The design of the mechanical scythe is great and well detailed. The panel of colors, red, black, red and grey is impactful and offers a great balance to the drawing. Honestly, I couldn't really give you advice, since I can find no major mistake in your work. Keep it up!
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hey can you pls critique this work i wanna know what i could do better
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What do you already know you need to improve?
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shading,anatomy,and perspective
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Be more specific
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