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Published: 2009-07-12 02:18:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 8467; Favourites: 110; Downloads: 0
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Raven's having some summer fun in the sun, and lookin' good doing it. Started the pic this morning, and worked nonstop until I finished it...this afternoon. I think I was possessed.Artwork by me.
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very nice! looks really good. raven is my fave female teen titan.
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That is sexy dude, awesome picture. I personally don't ship Raven with BB, only because I have a crush on her. xD This is going on my favorites, if you don't mind. (Though my fiancΓ©e might...)
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Yeah, me too
Thanks again
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You're welcome. So you have a crush on her too huh? Awesome. ^^
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That's really good! I have to say it freaks me out to see a calm, quiet darkish character i love in a bikini, but it is a cool concept and she is looking niiice
Jk, i'm not that weird.
Awesome job though!!!
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Yeah
Thanks dude.
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Not bad for the most part, but you need to work on doing eyes in profile. When drawing a face from the side view, you don't draw a full eye with the iris in the center. The eye should look more like this <
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Yeah, I went the cartoony route with her side-view gaze. Guess it just comes out of habit from drawing the eyes straight out forward.
I thank you for the critique. 
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It's a bit better, but still too close to the front edge of the face. There are a few problems with the face. First is the eye, it needs to be moved back just a little bit and the lids and lashes need to extend past the front of the eye a bit more (they currently don''t at all). Secondly, the face as a whole is too flat. Other than the nose, which itself is a bit off, there's no contour. The mouth in particular is recessed when it should project out just a little. She also has not cheek bone. No roundness to the front of the cheek. In fact, there is no cheek. There needs to be a nice curved cheek line from the lower lid down along the edge of the mouth.
Here's an online tutorial I just found on drawing faces in profile: [link] It should help you out more than I can just explaining it here.
Note what shapes the artist uses to build the head, and where he places the forehead, eye and brow, ear, nose, mouth, jaw line, hair, etc. Note where the head sits on the neck, how far the jaw projects. Take a look at real people from the side in different poses and tilts of the head.
Like I said, the rest of the anatomy looks great. The head needs work.
In fact, one thing you might want to try, since you're drawing her looking at the viewer, is look in the mirror with your head turned to the side. See how your own face looks in profile. See how the structures of your own face face look from the side. That should really help improve your art.
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Thanks for the information. I appreciate it
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you're welcome.
Here's the actual search for "faces in profile" I did: [link] There are a few other tutorials you might want to check out.
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Lol if she got burned do you think she would heal the burn? |D or let her face get sun burnt and use THAT exuse for blushing...BHAHAH |D
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That's tough to say, but I think she'd figure something out should she get too much sun
And thanks.
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This begs the question: Do grey people burn or tan?
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A very good question indeed.
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Very nice work. I'm sure BB would be drooling. lol.
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Yes. Yes he would
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