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tenks62 — WIP Oh captain my captain
Published: 2008-06-20 22:40:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Nope nope!No dead poets here!
Hush about Robin Williams!
Now, this is just a random little piece I started. I hope to finish it soon. Gotta move marks hand with the cookie in it so it doesn't look so odd.
The little ghost is just Captain... As for right now anyway. He probably would have a more elaborate name if I wasn't so out of it.
Or maybe if I just cared about him and his little soul. >:[
Haha
Out of all of Mark's spirits that hang around with him, the Captain is the one who fights the least and is mostly there just for advice and such... but if he needs to he can call up an army of a bunch of, also dead and tiny soldier spirit guys. haha
I just sorta imagine him coming out and being like "Ya know mark, in my day Opera was just some crazy rich lady, and now she's a religious figure head... When I was young I walked dogs for a living... Do you get where I'm coming from with all of this?"
Because I don't want him to make sense!!!
After I figure out how to make Mark's leg right and do the background a little more, this piece should be moving along pretty smoothly.
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Heehee, I like the idea for Captain. Also don't change his name because the simplicity works well. The problem with Mark's hand with the cookie is that it's up too high, it kind of looks like he's trying to feed his nose. Not to mention you don't hold a cookie that way. D: At least in my experience you hold it between yer thumb and index finger, sometimes even with a middle finger to boot, but that's fancy business.
Also the problem with his right leg (viewer's right) is that the foreshortening's off, move his foot up to where his knee is right now and make his foot much bigger so it looks like it's coming towards you. That should help.
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