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Published: 2016-10-29 12:00:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1430; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 26
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Description A lovely novice fire mage decided to drop by for my Halloween Masquerade party. She is quite the treat don't you think

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Contest! Points to be won!1st Prize: 1000 Pts., month long feature.
2nd Prize: 400 Pts. month long feature.
3rd Prize: 100 Pts., month long feature.
It's been awhile since I've had a contest. 
Let's change that.
Draw any of my Story OCs --> https://t3h3r3ee.deviantart.com/gallery/56940259/Story-OCs.
They're from a fantasy-esque world. I've added additional information on them in their respective folders. Any additional questions, feel free to note me.
After the winners have been chosen by my husband and I, we will run a poll to get a popular vote with the rest of the entries.
Winner of Poll: 50 Pts., month long feature.
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Comments: 18

chrisryder123 [2016-10-29 16:46:43 +0000 UTC]

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I like where this is going. You've got a very nice pose an a couple of cool shaders, but seems like you might be missing some of the techniques in DAZ/Poser to really make this come to life.
One of her feet is going through the floor, you can fix this by adding a smoothing modifier to the figure, and setting the floor as the collision item, then she will perfectly touch the floor and her feet will conform and look all lovely.
Second, if you're going to add a magic effect, it should be casting light, all you have to do in this instance is apply the the same diffuse map to the emission profile, and the red parts will cast red light, the yellow parts will cast yellow light etc. It will also stop the effect itself looking so fake and flat. There's a tutorial in my gallery which should cover most of that in some more detail.
Finally your background shaders look really low-rez. If you add a depth of focus to your camera you can blur this out, and make your character pop at the same time.

A fantastic start and look forward to seeing some of your other work.

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SlootySlots In reply to chrisryder123 [2017-04-04 20:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Funny how this guy wants a critique, you give him an excellent one and he ignores you! What a smiley motherfucker.

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chrisryder123 In reply to SlootySlots [2017-04-05 08:20:23 +0000 UTC]

:-p

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xSakuyaChan510x [2016-10-30 20:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!^^

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teturo In reply to xSakuyaChan510x [2016-10-30 21:08:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly ^_^

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xSakuyaChan510x In reply to teturo [2016-10-30 21:24:05 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!^^
She will look more good if shes with her cool car!

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DeadCobra [2016-10-29 17:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Lovely

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teturo In reply to DeadCobra [2016-10-29 18:13:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly ^_^

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shnoogums5060 [2016-10-29 15:34:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow, she's very beautiful there, Teturo.

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teturo In reply to shnoogums5060 [2016-10-29 16:16:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my friend ^_^

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sailorrob [2016-10-29 14:37:21 +0000 UTC]

she can sit in my lap if there aren't any chairs left ^_^

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teturo In reply to sailorrob [2016-10-29 14:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like a dangerous invitation ^_~

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sailorrob In reply to teturo [2016-10-29 14:49:03 +0000 UTC]

best kind

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teturo In reply to sailorrob [2016-10-30 13:52:50 +0000 UTC]

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PrinSessBun [2016-10-29 13:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Love the dress you put her in, love the pose! <3 

Thank you so much for entering!! <3

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teturo In reply to PrinSessBun [2016-10-29 14:25:51 +0000 UTC]

I am glad you like it, and my pleasure ^_^

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Maelora69 [2016-10-29 12:08:31 +0000 UTC]

Aww, she looks so pretty in that mask! Love the dress too! Kim will be pleased!

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teturo In reply to Maelora69 [2016-10-29 13:03:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^_^

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