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A request from the winner of my first Insta-Caption quiz. He wanted a bad-boy turning into this sweet beauty, so I decided that an age progression would be fun to spice things up. I loved writing Mike like some ancient evil from a fantasy story maybe a little too much. Oh well, I hope the second half worked as well. Feel free to tell me your thoughts and criticisms in the comments below.As always, I do not own this picture nor claim to own it.
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
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Maybe...but it's a pain to fix at this point.
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Interesting story! (Is that lil spell Latin?)
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Nope. Just backwards words. I made it a Zutanna reference.
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Huh, didn't see that! I've seen that type before, just didn't think about it! (I need to pay more attention! 
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hmm? something's wrong?
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No. I just use ellipses too often sometimes.
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Phew, finally got around to read that one (have been quite busy the last two days, actually).
This one's quite good actually, even considering how often that bad boy to good girl has been done before. I do guess the added AP does make a difference to some extent, making it a little bit more unique.
Anyways, I guess what I like about this caption is what I liked about the other captions so far as well - the style of writing and the descriptions, the fact that the TG part is actually used for something else than what it's usually used for, etc. Oh, and I see what you did there with the spell. Simple, but it does work well.
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Thanks for the feedback. This one was technically my first Instant-Commission. He wanted a bad boy to a good girl specifically, and when I saw the picture I thought the story would be generic. The AP made it a bit more unique, and allowed me the wonderful opportunity to write about a playground bully like he was an ancient evil from a fantasy story.
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Ah this was amazing, a great story and you just don't see AP that much. Also the incantation reminds me of stories I've written like the cockatrice story i wrote for you, if you run that incantation through google translate you'll find some strange stuff about chickens and TG I think XDΒ
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Thanks, the original picture made forΒ a little too boring of a TG, so I went with the Age Progression, I'm happy with the result. As for the incantation...I just recently read Zutanna, so That's why it's like that.
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cool, it just reminded me of incantations ive put in my stories before XD
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And it was awesome to read! And I hope that you do the request I gave you! Though I haven't read a piece of yours that I didn't find amazing
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Thanks, I do them in a random order, so It'll get done when I feel like using your particular picture.
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Sorry, that's how it works. Insta-Requests and commissions are a lot faster.
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How much would it cost to turn it into a commission?Β
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Maybe 10-20 points or so.
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Ten points? I can do that, so it's me (Kyle) into the picture I provided, correct
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Would you mind resending me the picture? I kind of just put them in a folder and look through them when I want to write...
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sta.sh/0ksnltsw7ez you remember what I look like from the harpy story right
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Er, um, maybe? Not really...
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X3 alright
Name: Kyle
Hair: reddish-brown (more brown than red)
Eyes: green
Clothing: blue jeans and a black t shirt
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Good caption, i feel a little sorry for Mike but bullying is not good.
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retsis aem ekam. Make me a sister. Clever.
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Yeah, I read some Zutanna and was inspired.
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Thanks! I love that it turned out well!
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Thanks! I'm glad it turned out well.
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Very well, I must add.
To tell the truth, this is probably the first AP TG I've seen to really play off both the childhood and newfound maturity perfectly.
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Thanks, I'm glad it worked given it was really my first shot at it.
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Like what you did with the incantation, very good story, and I hope Gertrude is happy with her new sister(and praying to whatever deity will listen will keep the spell permanent
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