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somnomollior [2015-11-12 13:57:24 +0000 UTC]
Very moving and beautifully expressed. It doesn't seem cheesy to me at all.
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hazel-thorne [2014-07-04 22:57:17 +0000 UTC]
You've said so much, so beautifully in so few words. It made me sad, but the grandchild's care and sympathy was touching.
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Shadow-Walker-22 [2014-06-10 06:08:55 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done and congratulations on DD
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wei-en [2014-06-09 11:29:04 +0000 UTC]
This is really...I don't know. It fits together well.
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Azuri-chann [2014-06-09 05:43:49 +0000 UTC]
It's really beautiful...and sad. Now I have this urge to go to my grandma and hug her. Really great work! Congrats on the DD! ; A ;
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bumpercarmcgee [2014-06-09 04:35:26 +0000 UTC]
My grandma died of alsheimers four years ago on Memorial day. I never got to see her much but I have these distinct memories of the old timey trailer she used to live in, her buying me watermelon and cheap model cars and yelling at my cousin, and that gravelly yet somehow comforting voice of hers. And her jowls. I didn't see her at the end and I'm glad for that because that's the way I like to think of her-- as someone very kind and mothering but still very human. You made me think of my Granny at a time where I've nearly forgotten her and at this juncture that's something I never hope to do.
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shuryukan [2014-06-09 03:54:20 +0000 UTC]
I cried ;-;.
BEAUTIFUL!
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Arokag In reply to shuryukan [2014-06-09 05:19:05 +0000 UTC]
You didnt cry.
Iidot.
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GreenElephantGirl In reply to Arokag [2014-06-09 06:41:11 +0000 UTC]
Are you OK? Is there something upsetting you? Like, a reason for snapping like you did up there?
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RedDragonfly [2014-06-09 03:11:32 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful writing!
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neurotype-on-discord [2014-06-09 02:57:13 +0000 UTC]
The topic might be a little cheesy, but it's so plainly told it's appealing, and the imagery in the end haiku is both evocative and just enough unexpected (I would've thought a waning moon).
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cremep0ps [2014-06-09 00:15:51 +0000 UTC]
i've never really had anyone important to me die or have a disease or anything so i don't know what it's like. i still kinda enjoyed this though.
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segura2112 [2014-06-08 22:01:25 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful and heart breaking, I lost my mother 4 years to this. Thank You and congrats on the DD,
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Shawn-McClurg [2014-06-08 18:27:38 +0000 UTC]
This is completely true.
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XxPolkadotxX [2014-06-08 18:27:06 +0000 UTC]
Very beautifully written...really hit home for me. Reminds me of my grandparents, my grandpa had Alzheimer's and my grandma had dementia.
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KairaNakune In reply to EpicLPSWolf [2014-06-09 00:45:10 +0000 UTC]
same thing just that my aunt is completely alone. She is 94 years old. No childeren, friends, husband, cousins, sisters or brothers but she knows she alone. She isnt really related to me but I call her that. She can't remember anything for 4 or 3 minutes either. :/
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Itsmellsofdoughnuts [2014-06-08 17:26:03 +0000 UTC]
What a beautiful-- wait, what's a haibun?
Uh, anyway... This is really, really lovely. I try not to dwell on things that get me super emotional.... I'm I might start crying later. But in a good-way-bad-way, good way being first.
....
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(This is me when I can't find words.)
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