cursed-frogcakes [2019-05-13 13:59:16 +0000 UTC]
nice work! the background looks nice, though the sun's rays are a bit strange and there's a few spots in the clouds that look like perhaps they were erased, and it leaves a little chunk?
other than that the background is nice! now for iron man, the shading looks good and the anatomy is pretty alright, his hands are a bit off, but it still looks good! i like the shading a lot, i don't have anything to say about it. something i notice is that if i zoom in, i notice some small spots where you forgot to erase some of your lines or left white background. i'm not sure what program you use to draw, but what i do is i draw my outlines on one layer, then either color in or use the fill tool on another layer. the fire from his feet seems a but rushed and doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the picture, like i said with the layers you could draw the fire on a layer where it's behind him. i use firealpaca, if you don't already have an art program that has layers i'd recommend using it. there's plenty of tutorials online as well! i think your art is very nice and you definitely have a lot of talent! good luck with your art!
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