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TaintedArtisan [2019-10-12 08:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Hi The-Future1 , hope you are well!  

I'm from rojectcomment: and i'm here to critique your work! That's a pretty decent representation of gruesome scar, but there are multiple issues i'll point out in hopes to help you improve in the future. Anyway, i'd like to start of by pointing out the lines itself. The look really rough. I'm not sure what you used to draw this, but if it's a program like Krita and you are using a drawing pen, I would recommend drawing your line art faster (It makes the lines look smoother that way). Again, i'm not so sure what you use to draw, so if it's not too much trouble, can you inform me what you use to make your digital artwork? I may have additional suggestions that may help you even further^^. My second critique is that the the colors are flowing out of scar's body. What I could recommend you to do is to use a program like Krita that has something called "Layers" (Most drawing programs should have that actually). There is a method that simplifies the coloring process and keeps everything within the lines. I can explain the process to you even further, but once again, i'll need to know what program you're using XD (Sorry if I seem a bit too nosey about it). The areas of the shading is well placed, but I think the color needs to be a bit softer/lighter than this. Finally, there are these dots/stains between his tail and leg. I would recommend doing some cleanup work after you're finished with what you made. That tends to happen when you draw sometimes. 

I hope this helps you!  

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GabriMax [2019-09-30 16:27:39 +0000 UTC]

I think Scar needs some food.

Well, I think the drawing is cool, but the lines are very pixelated. Looks like you did it in Paint. At least Scar's structure is fine, but he really needs some food. Is it the zombie version of Scar?

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ThePhantasim [2019-09-29 23:28:46 +0000 UTC]

hi im with ProjectComment and im here to review your art. First off since you wanted more gruesome, i believe you succeeded in that part. One being  the adding of extra scars on his fce, shoulder, etc which gives off the impression he's been into several or one major fight that left him severely injured. Speaking of injury the tearing of his lips, red blood shot eye, frailness, and damage to his right eye gives off a zombie like appearance adding with it he appears to be losing weight as his bones are more visible. Along with this theme his nails appear to be cracking as it looks like it won't be used again for fighting. Now where you placed the shadows seems to be correct as it looks like the light is coming from in front of him and the shadow appears behind his legs. Adding white to his black mane helps give it a shaggy and messy appearance along with his grotesque look, makes everyone who sees him think he's losing his sanity and is noting more than a shell. Overall, this is pretty decent every part of his design is used perfectly on making him more gruesome than his more g rated counterpart.

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soseztheleadr [2019-09-29 20:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. 

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arthunter3 [2019-09-29 19:22:29 +0000 UTC]

If Lion King was PG-13.

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DragnBoi65 [2019-09-29 19:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good

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