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The0ne-u-lost — Twilight at the beach
Published: 2013-09-26 12:07:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 5039; Favourites: 253; Downloads: 140
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Well I had to go back to my roots and draw anime.It's been awhile and I didn't want to lose my edge.
Let me know what you think.
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Comments: 45
okay let do this
cons:
1 there a hole between he two mouth line you most likely did this on purpose thou it just bug's me
2 the highlights on her hair don't match the show ( i assumed the was on not on purpose because the rest of mane- i mean hair dose)
3. her arm look in a really uncomfy position there
pro
1 the water look very anime like
2. i like how you make the tops on her shoulder sun burn it just add a little more
3.the showing is well done (at least beater than i could do)
4. the backround is wonderful
other (i cant figure to put in pro or cons)
1 the hair is all put to one side
2.female swimsuit usually have a lower neck line ,how ever i don't mind that showing modestly is not that bad just a nitpick
3 .floty-toy (the professional name) are more puffy here were i live
score
Vision:3
why: it a cute picture but it don't really make you think of any thing
originality :4
why:make human of the pony is hard how ever -1 because the human in a swimsuit has been done to death
technique:4
why:the pro outweigh the cons
impact:3
why: i think this is the exact same a vison
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This isn't even a critique at all. You should really give an in depth and detailed review(using the following criteria) about it than giving your own personal and not something done by a grade school student. Yes, this "critique" is absurd.
"3 .floty-toy (the professional name) are more puffy here were i live" You know, the object varies depending on where you live.
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I really love Twilight's design and the colours. However, I think the colours are a little airbrushed in some places, and the swimming hoop thing (completely at a loss for its name, sorry ;n
Overall, though, the composition is lovely, and it really is a wonderful piece of artwork <3
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I'm still working on improving, I'll get there one day.
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You should do Dashie in a bikini sometime.
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Thanks, I loved working on it.
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Not normally into humanized ponies, but the character is really good! I like how this anime still looks pretty 3D at least towards the front of the work. For some reason, the very distant background (the darkest blue part of the ocean bordering the sky) looks kinda 2Dish and flat... I can't explain why though and I don't really understand why myself lol; the part of the background closest the the viewer looks awesome however.
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I tend to come overboard on the shines, as I find them to be a lot more fun to do.
The reason there are so many of them in this picture is because she is wet.
BEACH TIME!!
What?! Summer is over......dang....
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Oh that is why the back of the ocean isn't as 3D looking (99% sure now, still a little uncertain)! Its not shiny. The shiny curves of the water trickling down makes the character look 3D, and the white caps make the near part of the ocean look 3D. I get it now.
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I don't watch the show but DAMN look at this! I love how you did everything simple yet you managed to provide life and emotion to this piece. Plus I really like the colors and the shine
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You don't need to know the show to enjoy the artwork.
That is a universal truth and you my friend are a good person for not judging, Thank you.
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You are very welcome 
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It's okay you don't have to know the show to like something.
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Very Well done, my friend
I love the way you drew this, in every way. Dont ever stop drawing what you are best at. Anime really is your best skill
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I've been doing it for years after all.
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Yep, and you still have not lost your touch
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I love it~ Twilight is so cute~ I love how you drew the water c:
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Thanks I'm glad you like it.
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Summer I miss you! By the way, spectacular pic. Twilight looks pretty cute, and the background is amazing
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Thank you, The background was fun to make.
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