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Theamat In reply to bbb35 [2014-06-29 23:47:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. The person who commissioned it only wanted the girls.... But Β I took some artistic license.
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Theamat In reply to bbb35 [2014-07-01 21:43:05 +0000 UTC]
Lol, give me your email, I'll send you my commission prices or you can email me at theamat@gmail.com. Be glad to start planning!
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Thegoddamnjeffman In reply to Theamat [2012-06-11 14:35:27 +0000 UTC]
You should be! It looked perfect to me, but admittedly I don't have a trained eye. From a fun and storytelling standpoint, it was definitely A+ material.
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KGTgallery [2012-06-10 03:20:41 +0000 UTC]
well, it says you want a critique...anatomy wise, everything looks good. there's maybe a couple of places where the midsections look thin, but that's comic books for you. Tony looks the closest to being off to me, but it might be his metal underoos.
the tableau itself feels oddly busy and empty at the same time. i'm chalking it up to the fact that there's big swathes of empty black space around a very crowded table. speaking of the table, having that many ladies all cramming together on one side looks a little odd. it might have looked better if a couple were in the background to tony's right looking over instead, but hindsight and all that.
detail-wise there's nothing that looks very wrong, but there's a couple of places that maybe could've used more attention. shulkie's bra looks a little too flat for something that lacy (it gets mentioned first because everyone's lookin' at it) especially with the strap standing out like it does. widow's pistol and starfire's cup (bowl?) seem a little overtly simple and generic, which i'm mostly attributing to the fact guns are hard to draw in one case.
i would like to know what that is starfire's holding though.
overall, a nice piece. but there's always room to improve with art.
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Theamat In reply to KGTgallery [2012-06-10 21:32:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique! I had some of the same critiques myself, but mine were alot harsher! Lol
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DarkKnightJRK In reply to Theamat [2012-06-10 04:43:23 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I could maybe see the cigar with Karen more, but Janet works fairly well too--she was a fashion mogul, as I recall. That said, I think the thin cigarette holder thing might work better for Natasha.
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Nomad55 [2012-06-09 20:42:44 +0000 UTC]
lmao Nice
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Theamat In reply to Nomad55 [2012-06-10 01:45:25 +0000 UTC]
Tnx!
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BigMike20X6 [2012-06-09 20:14:19 +0000 UTC]
Tony should totally quit the hero business and go into stripping.
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Theamat In reply to SmokeyandtheBandit [2012-06-09 20:37:29 +0000 UTC]
Sorry dude, artists prerogative! I'm surprised, that you don't approve, I threw in plenty of girls in this game. But, honestly, I like to draw satirical storytelling. It's not about the girls for me, its about the story. And this is a great story!
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Theamat In reply to SmokeyandtheBandit [2012-06-10 21:37:55 +0000 UTC]
No, I try to concentrate on drawing, not coloring. But I've welcomed others on the DA to color it, so that may still happen!
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Theamat In reply to SmokeyandtheBandit [2012-06-11 00:47:17 +0000 UTC]
Those specific pieces are for The Line it is Drawn and were colored for that reason. Any pieces in my gallery that were not colored by me are credited to some very talented colorists.
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SmokeyandtheBandit In reply to Theamat [2012-06-11 00:52:48 +0000 UTC]
I see. Two questions then. Do you know any of the artist who do color your pictures?
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Theamat In reply to SmokeyandtheBandit [2012-06-13 18:09:14 +0000 UTC]
Please see my commission information in my journal and send me a note.
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Theamat In reply to krisslanza [2012-06-09 20:37:51 +0000 UTC]
What can I say, you can't please everybody!
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krisslanza In reply to Theamat [2012-06-09 20:46:29 +0000 UTC]
That is quite true I suppose!
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