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TheAwkwardFangirl — Shards
Published: 2014-02-09 18:49:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 265; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Shatter.My dreams shatter.
My face shatters.
My love shatters.
My feeling shatters.
I hurry, try to pick up the pieces.
But in my rush, I fall.
Face to face with my shattered reflection, blood tainting my face and my fingers picking up the pieces.
I wince as the glass cuts my fingers, so I rub them.
Try to numb the pain.
But it keeps bleeding, and it makes me angry. Why won't the blood go away?
A shadowy spectre steps forward, offering a hand. I take it, and the pain fades away.
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Comments: 26
Very well done
Your writing has a depth to it that keeps the reader interested from the beginning.
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whoa, nice shadow reference and what not, well done.
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Aw, thanks. It's not my best work, but I appreciate the compliment.
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np at all, you help me then i have no problem helping you right? writers have to stick together at times, in this growing artist world.
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Of course. We're a dying breed.
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yeah but that's what makes us shine.
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This is a marvelous piece of writing, my friend 
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Thanks a lot!
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You're welcome! And I understand, I get that feeling sometimes too. And I think it's great!
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Thanks! I always enjoy hearing from you.
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You're welcome ^^ And yay :3
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Are you a writer or something? lol, you are a reeeaaaally good writer!
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Thanks. O3O I think I was high on tired when I wrote it.e.e
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im high on ice cream cake o:
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