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MechanicPluto24 [2018-12-05 19:44:19 +0000 UTC]
May not be my OTP, but damn I love Soriel, they are meant to be together :3
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Wralai [2018-08-15 01:32:45 +0000 UTC]
I really like this one! I especially like the placement of the colours - it's very thoughtful! I like how Toriel's dress is a lighter purple, and so placed on the darker end of the spectrum. I realise that it may not have been a concious choice - maybe you just had to put her at the edge of the frame, but it makes her dress stand out very well despite also being purple. I think you could've gone a bit darker with the gradient of Sans' side - he doesn't stand out as well as Toriel, but that was probably hard to do because of his pose. Toriel's fire also doesn't stick out, although again, it'd be hard to make it do that. My tip for fixing that is to increase the line weight on things you want to stand out - feel free to completely ignore that, though! You have a realistic style that goes best with thin lines, so thick lines might not work. The crying is also a little off, imo. A few crying tips:
- People's faces usually flush when they're crying. Sans has bones and Toriel has fur, so that might not apply.
- Crying usually follows the shape of the face and then drips off the chin Here's a good ref: www.pinterest.ca/pin/637751997…
(Also I think you forgot to colour in between Toriel's ankles)
Sorry if this was hard to follow or rude at all.
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TheBelowGround In reply to Wralai [2018-08-15 03:25:09 +0000 UTC]
Dude holy f u c k
I did not expect to get such detailed and helpful criticism on a piece like this lol thank you so much.
And line weight is a good idea, I'll be sure to keep it in mind!
Also, the fact you've mentioned my inability to draw tears twice now really says a lot. I'll be sure to study that!
Also, for the Toriel contrast thing, I used a different colour to shade underneath the dress than for the background. On her dress, I used blue, and in the background, I used black to make the shading stand out. I'm glad it wasn't obvious!
(also maybe Toriel just has three feet you don't know)
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Sheepaleepz [2018-08-14 16:17:10 +0000 UTC]
Oooooh this looks so pretty! I love it!
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Art-Void7 [2018-08-14 13:27:05 +0000 UTC]
im one of the people who spells it "color" but you can spell it however you want lmao-
also nice job-
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TheBelowGround In reply to Art-Void7 [2018-08-14 17:17:45 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's spelled like that in America XD
But in, like, everywhere else in the world it's spelled with a U so like I dunno anymore.
Same thing with feet versus meters and stuff.
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Art-Void7 In reply to TheBelowGround [2018-08-14 17:39:59 +0000 UTC]
ikrrrr
well i do live in america sooo xDD
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TheBelowGround In reply to Art-Void7 [2018-08-17 22:02:35 +0000 UTC]
One of my favourite YouTubers said that Canada was America's hat and I think that's accurate.
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Kaagex [2018-08-14 12:10:35 +0000 UTC]
YUS!
You spelt it correctly!
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