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BrayonHopper [2015-07-22 21:01:18 +0000 UTC]

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Overall I think this Photo was well done, & the Vision was rendered well. My only suggestion would possible be that prep work for the model himself. The darkness around his eyes looks like make gone wrong, & a much needed pedicure is evident, & a patchy tan. Otherwise I thought the work was well done.

Lighting, Contrast, positioning was very good. Detail on the bigger image was rendered well. Did not see any blurriness. Hands being cropped I'm torn on, as it seems a little off. Colors were highlighted well.

Overall emotional impact from this, was a Playful sense, & one of a very happy guy in front of the camera. Which is a contrast to other pics of yours with him, where he looks remorseful, depressed, & forlorn. He needs to smile more.

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thedreamismine In reply to BrayonHopper [2015-07-23 16:02:08 +0000 UTC]

Another great critique Brayon.
As for the model, well my models don't use MUA'ss, and few of them do anything special to themselves for my shoots.Ā  So IĀ  pretty much take them as they come, as they are.
As for the cropping, I do a number of shots for a pose, different zoom levels, and then pick the one I like best all around, especially the model's expression.Ā  So the expression here overrode the slightly tight crop.
This was my second shoot with this model, and I think he was a little more relaxed with me.Ā  Also he was not nude in this shoot as he was in the first.Ā  I don't think he was particularly at ease being nude for me.Ā 

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adyalexander [2015-07-27 11:12:19 +0000 UTC]

The moment I saw the pic and had the first overall look at the framing i was like "agaaain with the cutting" I hardly see any problem with patchy tan or hardly even notice the nails on his feet. I do believe the pic went great just try not to cut his fingers and head next time

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thedreamismine In reply to adyalexander [2015-07-27 17:21:51 +0000 UTC]

I admit it was a poorly cropped shot.
But the other qualities I liked enough to post anyway.

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adyalexander In reply to thedreamismine [2015-07-28 13:20:11 +0000 UTC]

As I said the cropping always wrecks my brain, lol, but I told you , the pic is really cool.Ā 

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dwseeker [2015-07-23 15:21:48 +0000 UTC]

This makes me smile.

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thedreamismine In reply to dwseeker [2015-07-23 16:03:07 +0000 UTC]

Ā  Good.

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BrayonHopper [2015-07-22 21:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Excellent!

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thedreamismine In reply to BrayonHopper [2015-07-23 09:34:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much Brayon

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dynakor [2015-07-22 17:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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thedreamismine In reply to dynakor [2015-07-22 17:41:00 +0000 UTC]

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