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thefu-chan — Goodbye [NSFW]
Published: 2005-08-16 19:03:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description can’t you hear me crying in the night
how can you say that everything will be alright
when the moon shines bright outside
I’m there doing my best to hide

every night this past week
I have seen myself as too weak
then the day dawns bright and clear
but somehow I know the end is near

I know I shouldn’t feel this way
such different me’s for night and day
but when the shadows start to form
I know that I’ll never be one to conform

so on this night I must say to you
now is the time for me to say adieu
courting death, this night we fly
and this shall be my last goodbye
Comments: 5

ardamouch [2005-09-15 08:23:41 +0000 UTC]

So sad i feel the ascending&descending of certain emotions and feelings , well in this harsh live Death do appear as the only way to end an everyday suffer ((I really hope this it's not a self experince accident that made you chose death as solution here )). Nice poem.

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thefu-chan In reply to ardamouch [2005-09-15 23:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It was kinda self experience, I was suicidal but I've found some reasons to live and so I'm not anymore. I'm glad you like the poem.

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BellDiablo [2005-09-13 00:30:24 +0000 UTC]

beautiful poem! the structure stays complete and the imagery is captivating. nice work!

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thefu-chan In reply to BellDiablo [2005-09-13 01:22:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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osaka-aquabus [2005-08-17 23:46:59 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Hauntingly beautiful.

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