Comments: 10
Notten1 [2015-01-16 00:17:56 +0000 UTC]
If you want criticisms, I can be of assistance, thw shading on the eye is unnecessary, but it isn't a failure, but I can see you trying to emulate the Comic's style, which is good, but needs practice, a lot more than, say, cell shading or soft shading. Hatching is a technique used for hundreds of years in art, and is used in a very simple form, however also combines with Cell shading, light though. Nice drawing though, love the colors and hair. The Iris and pupil are great simplistic, but the outlining is best in the same color, or with Gradients as some Anime's do. Hope I helped! ^_^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
TheGarry-D In reply to Notten1 [2015-01-16 03:23:44 +0000 UTC]
I didn't actually asked for criticisms, but still, thank you so much for taking your time and writing that.
I'll see what I can do in the next drawings ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Notten1 In reply to TheGarry-D [2015-01-16 04:25:05 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, loved the drawing and I kinda have an obsession for self improvement, and I guess I can get to a mode where my emotions turn off, so I hope you didn't get offended at all, it's just mutual care for your improvement. I remember one dude I knew, his mom kept saying to him that he was a great artist, however he was abysmal, he drew stick figures. He was 17. So I sorta have a complex about it... Haha... Oh, I hope I didn't offend...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
TheGarry-D In reply to Notten1 [2015-01-16 07:12:10 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, you did not offended me at all. it's fine ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Notten1 In reply to TheGarry-D [2015-01-16 07:17:13 +0000 UTC]
That's nice, because I see great effort and potential in it! In fact, about the Criticism thing, I ask people all the time in the Description of my stuff, but no one listens, and just glides by, don't even get many views.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
TheGarry-D In reply to Notten1 [2015-01-16 07:25:38 +0000 UTC]
Your art is nice ^^
And thank you for such a kind words!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Notten1 In reply to TheGarry-D [2015-01-16 07:41:14 +0000 UTC]
I try to make it good, really do, but some people really don't care, but I'm on the other side of the fence, so I know what it is to be ignored even though you have respectable art. Oh, and no problem on the Words, for words are simply an expression of a person.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0