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superweirdman [2018-05-07 16:19:32 +0000 UTC]
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I don't really understand what Bonnie is doing. Is she posturing and leaning forward away from the viewer, or is she wondering what happened to her body? You could try outlining her body on scratch first, then make the texture of her slimy composition, to distinguish her body from an unidentifiable mass.
In Oozey's case, her hands aren't really that distinguishable from blobs, so you may need to create the shape of her hands first. Also, on her feet, given her the same form as her whole body. It looks as if she stepped in mud, but isn't a mud human.
Other than that, you can use some sort of art software to improve the shape and remove the pencil-and-paper filter.
You've got a start on this at least, so I'll compliment you on that.
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steplessLadder [2018-05-05 00:06:34 +0000 UTC]
One of my recent favorites of yours. Couldn't better flip these two characters into eachother's personas yet keep what makes them so very different!
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TheLiquidBoy In reply to steplessLadder [2018-05-08 02:35:51 +0000 UTC]
It does show off how different the properties of their slime is. Oozey's slime is much stronger than Bonnie's ;w;
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Ogihci2 [2018-05-03 02:35:03 +0000 UTC]
Cute~ ^7^
I'd wanna hug them both. ^3^
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TheLiquidBoy In reply to Ogihci2 [2018-05-04 11:08:28 +0000 UTC]
Lol, just make sure your wearing a rain coat for Bonnie Xb
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Ogihci2 In reply to TheLiquidBoy [2018-05-04 14:48:09 +0000 UTC]
I don't mind getting goo-d x3
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PinkestBalloon [2018-05-03 01:47:59 +0000 UTC]
They're both just too cute and huggable.
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Sephy90 [2018-05-03 00:39:46 +0000 UTC]
Bonnie's lovely in that. ^^
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TheLiquidBoy In reply to Sephy90 [2018-05-04 15:05:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm quite happy how she looks in Oozey's form ;w;
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