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Theoddra — Torn apart

Published: 2013-01-30 04:00:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 574; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 17
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Description Reading lines
Lines of reason
Like a breath
A breath of treason
Against my will
I feel the season
What else to read
But lines of reason?
I break away
I'm torn apart
From where I stand
My broken art
The lines in sand
Say stray from course
I'm broken down
So shoot the horse


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Comments: 20

Trippy4U [2013-02-08 14:28:42 +0000 UTC]

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agbuttery [2013-02-03 08:44:56 +0000 UTC]

I Like it good work.

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Theoddra In reply to agbuttery [2013-02-03 08:52:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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bear48 [2013-02-01 20:40:59 +0000 UTC]

sweet job

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Theoddra In reply to bear48 [2013-02-01 21:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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scheinbar [2013-01-31 13:40:35 +0000 UTC]

featured here:
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please a comment there and a fave, if you like it

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Theoddra In reply to scheinbar [2013-01-31 19:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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scheinbar In reply to Theoddra [2013-01-31 22:13:25 +0000 UTC]

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doodler89 [2013-01-30 19:52:25 +0000 UTC]

So great to see your art again, I'm loving it as always!

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Theoddra In reply to doodler89 [2013-01-31 09:30:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I am going to try to do some more artwork. I've just been so out of it when it comes to drawing.

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doodler89 In reply to Theoddra [2013-01-31 20:05:57 +0000 UTC]

I look forward to it.(= Any particular reason?

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Theoddra In reply to doodler89 [2013-01-31 20:09:10 +0000 UTC]

No, not really. At least something that I do not realize, it just started losing meaning to me, so I stopped. But, trying to find meaning in it again, so hopefully new work soon.

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doodler89 In reply to Theoddra [2013-02-01 19:22:42 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to that feeling, I've been feeling like that on and off for a while. I hope the feeling passes soon.

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Theoddra In reply to doodler89 [2013-02-01 19:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Same here.

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wordconvict [2013-01-30 08:46:11 +0000 UTC]

I love your Art Poetry, Poetry Art? This could be a new category to submit art under! Interesting!

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Theoddra In reply to wordconvict [2013-01-31 09:30:16 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Yea, that category would fit me pretty well!

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bear48 [2013-01-30 05:37:08 +0000 UTC]

nice job

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Theoddra In reply to bear48 [2013-01-31 09:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Jess-Foxx-Quinn [2013-01-30 04:55:49 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting Travis. There is some details there that make it much more than you speak of in the added prose.

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Theoddra In reply to Jess-Foxx-Quinn [2013-01-31 09:30:27 +0000 UTC]

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