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Ratros [2012-05-12 03:30:28 +0000 UTC]
lots of grammar errors as usual *poke poke*, I would recommend reading over your work to check it. At least that's what I do, but to each there own. Interesting set up, does make you curious in what happens next, but it's rather short so I can't give a full review. And the title has a nice ring to it to.
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TheSpokesman In reply to Ratros [2012-05-12 03:34:00 +0000 UTC]
Now you know darn good and well that if spell check doesn't catch it I won't. Not until I forgot what I wrote- then re-read. That's how my brain works.
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nonsence-but-nice [2012-05-12 02:58:53 +0000 UTC]
Ah the joys of superpowers, I love them so, well kind of obvious since I write about them so much. Nice first usage of a power, I'll be interested to hear how you describe it. In my setting we have something similar, which is called "Rapid Decomposition" or "Enduced Decay" or the slang term of "Rotters"
I look forward to seeing more of this world. As always. Nice one Tracy.
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