Comments: 10
Ratros [2011-04-04 20:33:02 +0000 UTC]
And from this scene we know who the love interest is, and if it doesn't turn out to be true, then you changed it to mess with us.
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TheSpokesman In reply to Ratros [2011-04-06 17:53:51 +0000 UTC]
Come on now, cutsie jokes are fine when your setting next to me,but can't I get a helpful comment from you every now and again?
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Ratros In reply to TheSpokesman [2011-04-16 22:15:34 +0000 UTC]
Nothing really to say. I have no problems to state, and you should know I already like it.
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TheSpokesman In reply to Ratros [2011-04-19 23:35:36 +0000 UTC]
You could always mention a part you especially liked or even tiny things you had to re-read or what not. You knows I am the paranoid about my writing.
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Ratros In reply to TheSpokesman [2011-04-20 01:27:29 +0000 UTC]
fine then, I'll reread it later tonight and give you a detailed explanation of what is wrong, what is right, and what will happen...
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TheSpokesman In reply to Ratros [2011-04-20 02:16:16 +0000 UTC]
You don't have to do that man, that was just for future reference.
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Ratros In reply to TheSpokesman [2011-04-20 02:31:34 +0000 UTC]
Too late, it shall be done. I shall tear your story down and make you cry like it was the ending to old yeller...well...probably won't do that, but I'll give a full critique later.
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TheSpokesman In reply to MrsDeGoeysCreations [2011-03-17 01:17:11 +0000 UTC]
Well, thank you very much! I appreciate that! I fixed my links, so hopefully chapter hopping will be easier. I'm also working on the next chapter and crossing my fingers that I'll be able to finish it much faster than the last.
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