Ratros [2012-12-20 03:16:54 +0000 UTC]
Ooooooh...short but good. Now we're getting to some good consequence for actions. I love how this story is shaping up and can't wait to see where it goes. Giving Dark a brother was a brilliant twist that threw the whole story on it's head. Though still need to work on descriptions if you ask me (so do a lot of published authors).
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