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Published: 2007-02-19 15:32:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 556; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 6
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Description i sit in a room surrounded by white,
nothing around me, nothing in sight,
no music dancing upon my ears,
no shadows bouncing upon my fears,
no muse to tell me what to say,
i have no pen to write anyway,
my mind is empty no thoughts around,
no ticking clock, not a single sound,
the brightlight above me flickers though,
through the shape of a door, a place to go,
i feel there's somthing for which im late,
i stand to my feet, walk towards my fate,
all of a sudden my soul is lifted,
and towards the dooor my eyes have shifted,
a dark silhouette of a familiar man,
i continue to walk because i feel i can,
dont no where im going, dont no where im from,
but i am at piec, my body is numb................

Sorry for th long poem lol, oh well
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Comments: 22

ZombiePluto [2007-03-08 02:12:58 +0000 UTC]

Her eyes are really intense, I like the colour choices here.

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thevoiceofheart In reply to ZombiePluto [2007-03-09 15:52:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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LoOlOo2sky [2007-02-23 01:18:00 +0000 UTC]

this is something that can move you,good job!

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thevoiceofheart In reply to LoOlOo2sky [2007-02-23 08:19:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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LoOlOo2sky In reply to thevoiceofheart [2007-02-23 17:35:58 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

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Outgoing4now [2007-02-20 11:35:15 +0000 UTC]

the poem is lovely. So poetic (ahahahahaha)
Like the work on the pic

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thevoiceofheart In reply to Outgoing4now [2007-02-20 18:30:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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Outgoing4now In reply to thevoiceofheart [2007-02-23 14:43:43 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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Rojozorra [2007-02-20 06:05:12 +0000 UTC]

It's lovely. I do like both poem and picture.

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thevoiceofheart In reply to Rojozorra [2007-02-20 18:30:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Rojozorra In reply to thevoiceofheart [2007-02-21 04:39:58 +0000 UTC]

You are ever so welcome dear!

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VioLaHeCaTe [2007-02-19 21:56:18 +0000 UTC]

I've got a question for you..If i give you one of my photos could you do a similar work like these yours on it? I love these pictures too much, I'd really like to have one of my photos done in this way..Let me know..Kisses ^^

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thevoiceofheart In reply to VioLaHeCaTe [2007-02-20 18:29:16 +0000 UTC]

yeh ofcourse i can, if the photo is your portrait and i can see the eyes well then i will do this kind of thing to it, if you tell me which one of my pics you like the best then i can do it in that manner

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VioLaHeCaTe In reply to thevoiceofheart [2007-02-21 15:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Well, actually i love all your works..I put my trust in your own interpretation of my picture, I don't care how you do it, just let inspire yourself as you like..If you can and if you want, of course..

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gloomytacun [2007-02-19 20:08:05 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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thevoiceofheart In reply to gloomytacun [2007-02-20 18:27:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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aguaamante [2007-02-19 18:25:06 +0000 UTC]

its beautiful. her eyes are so majestic as if they've seen too much pain and the way her lips are somewhat pursed go with the whole image. the poem is also lovely. Good Job!!

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thevoiceofheart In reply to aguaamante [2007-02-20 18:27:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you hun

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ef-barber [2007-02-19 16:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Great poem, its quite sad tho. it goes really well with the image ive got your exam paper for art from mr babington, the questions are crappy

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thevoiceofheart In reply to ef-barber [2007-02-20 18:26:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you emma

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VioLaHeCaTe [2007-02-19 16:33:21 +0000 UTC]

I love her eyes and her eyes' make-up!! *_*

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thevoiceofheart In reply to VioLaHeCaTe [2007-02-19 17:04:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^_^

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