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ThisCorrosion — No-One There

Published: 2005-01-03 00:46:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description Fear dripping slowly to the floor
A touch of the dusty remains brings a flash of blood
A reminder of what once was
And the ghost of a violent past

It has been awoken

The normal exterior hides a million hidden lies
Broken glass of shattered minds
The table, a tool for destruction now holds a fruit bowl
So innocent
No-one would guess deep red staining underneath the paint

History always watching

The walls hold all this sadness and pain
Re-playing to themselves the screams of mercy
They cry inside, the deeply ingrained mourning
Tell themselves that it never happened

But it did

Where once a cage did stand now lies normality
A lamp where there was once the most overwhelming darkness
If you listen softly, maybe you can hear the cries
Maybe you could feel the chill of darkness

Maybe you could feel death

The immortal soul of the immoral darkness is still stalking
Is still haunting those who will never forget
Still consumes the walls of this house of pain
Close your eyes and you can still hear the screams
Still hear the walls crying out in vain

Never escape the sound

They never lose…
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Comments: 14

SentimentallyScared [2005-07-22 19:41:06 +0000 UTC]

I rather enjoyed this.
Well done my dear

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ThisCorrosion In reply to SentimentallyScared [2005-07-23 06:56:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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SentimentallyScared In reply to ThisCorrosion [2005-08-17 00:10:13 +0000 UTC]

You're very very welcomes

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randombodyparts [2005-01-03 12:53:48 +0000 UTC]

wow! this is amazing... well done hun

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ThisCorrosion In reply to randombodyparts [2005-01-03 19:08:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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RapedSoul320 [2005-01-03 04:25:47 +0000 UTC]

hehe ooooh, this sent chills up my spine!!! nicely done sweetheart. I like your use of words

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ThisCorrosion In reply to RapedSoul320 [2005-01-03 18:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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crazynloveless [2005-01-03 00:52:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is really good! I LOVE IT! The imagery was amazing!

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ThisCorrosion In reply to crazynloveless [2005-01-03 18:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you And thanks for the fave

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crazynloveless In reply to ThisCorrosion [2005-01-03 22:19:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, and you're welcome! *^.^*

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ColDonut [2005-01-03 00:48:58 +0000 UTC]

May I feel fear? Good special

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ThisCorrosion In reply to ColDonut [2005-01-03 00:49:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I like the stars

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StudioMinds [2005-01-03 00:47:25 +0000 UTC]

wow...quite the magic touch there, eh ?
This is more than nice and you should be proud

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ThisCorrosion In reply to StudioMinds [2005-01-03 00:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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