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kurikurikuririn [2008-05-21 01:17:57 +0000 UTC]
wow nice job w/ the texture and proportions
the position definitely fits the mood you were going for but i've just got a little suggestion. eyes and eyebrows definitely play a big role in expression and she looks a bit sleepy here...so perhaps the eyebrows could be altered a bit up for that "worried look" and the eyes slightly more open?
all in all though it's a great pic^-^
lol i still need to get the hang of drawing folds in clothes xD
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thottless In reply to kurikurikuririn [2008-05-21 02:13:21 +0000 UTC]
yes, i have a problem with that. whenever i try to draw someone looking down, it always looks like their eyes are closed. great suggestion though, i'll try that!
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kurikurikuririn In reply to thottless [2008-05-21 03:52:17 +0000 UTC]
thanks and no problem!
now that i think about it though along with making the eyes bigger defining the eyelid a bit more might help as well...hmm but i typically draw manga style so that might not do the trick...but see what happens^-^
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thottless [2008-02-07 21:26:17 +0000 UTC]
hmm... i see what you mean. not really intentional, but i guess it just goes with what i was aiming for.
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