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Published: 2007-12-20 22:07:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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Description I tried a drawing with a little more expression this time. The character is supposed to have a feeling a brooding and moodiness.
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kurikurikuririn [2008-05-21 01:17:57 +0000 UTC]

wow nice job w/ the texture and proportions

the position definitely fits the mood you were going for but i've just got a little suggestion. eyes and eyebrows definitely play a big role in expression and she looks a bit sleepy here...so perhaps the eyebrows could be altered a bit up for that "worried look" and the eyes slightly more open?

all in all though it's a great pic^-^

lol i still need to get the hang of drawing folds in clothes xD

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thottless In reply to kurikurikuririn [2008-05-21 02:13:21 +0000 UTC]

yes, i have a problem with that. whenever i try to draw someone looking down, it always looks like their eyes are closed. great suggestion though, i'll try that!

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kurikurikuririn In reply to thottless [2008-05-21 03:52:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks and no problem!

now that i think about it though along with making the eyes bigger defining the eyelid a bit more might help as well...hmm but i typically draw manga style so that might not do the trick...but see what happens^-^

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thottless [2008-02-07 21:26:17 +0000 UTC]

hmm... i see what you mean. not really intentional, but i guess it just goes with what i was aiming for.

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AeonReclaimer [2008-02-07 06:26:22 +0000 UTC]

And I don't know if it is intentional...but there is a bit of sleepiness showing.

Or it could be the fact that I am writing this comment at 12:24 A.M.

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