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More tentacle monster fighting! Spice delivers quite a reversal, to which the ghoul doesn't look to be very amused by...
I might draw another page or two this week, but i was planning on doing some things with my friends, so i might just draw some doodles or maybe a gag comic or an "Ask Nora"
If you don't know what an "Ask Nora" is, It's a comic strip where i answer questions asked of my character Nora, and it can be found here: tonythetiger16.deviantart.com/... Just comment on any "Ask Nora" and i'll draw a strip to answer your question.
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To start things off, I like to state that it's really nice to see another deviant that creates his own manga/comic 100% traditionally. It really takes a lot of skill and patience to pull it off
Anyways, I really like the layout you did with this page. It shows every moment in action clearly and understandably. Also, the idea and design of the ghoul is very original and well portrayed. Really gives out that intentional fear on how the audience should act toward the ghoul being presented. The shading and line work is done well. And the placement of the characters within each panel is concise and unquestionable.
One thing that concerns me is the anatomy. I know, I know, we all heard this lecture before. I have to admit, my anatomy is not well done either. But from looking at this (especially her right hand and the ghoul's two hands in the 3rd panel), it looks lazily done (sorry for being so direct and brutal). Also, as for his tentacles (I think that's what they are e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a⦠" width="19" height="19" alt="
Overall, the effort and design is well thought out. I think the anatomy overall could use a bit of a touch up (possibly try using guidelines if you haven't done so yet). And the story your idea is going great so far. Keep up the awesome work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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I think I've critiqued this artist before,but the fella rejects it as non-objective.
Β To me the art needs more impact though,it needs more lines,not the thick ones but those finer thin lines to make it more expressive and more movey. I see that almost all of the panels in this particular page needs those action thinner lines.
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You said I was half right about her kicking his ass
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