Mournful SongSingingNo SunIn my SkyMelody SpreadsInfection SeekingSadnessI never LovedMy Lonely Life:She LeftDeath LingeredNo LightLonging…My ErrorEden…Selfish EveLike EgoI EndlesslyExtenuateYou EverCannot EraseOr ExpiateMy EmnitySo Envious.Elegy…I PrayYour PerfectionIn ParadiseSo PatheticMy PleaFor Pardon.PainSister,S L E E P
affirmation [2003-03-20 18:36:14 +0000 UTC]
Good style and flow. Cool job.
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ladysethos [2003-03-04 23:41:15 +0000 UTC]
Again, nice sense of style. The subject matter is complimented by the structure.
niceboyjs [2003-03-03 04:48:09 +0000 UTC]
I think it's really good, I've never written a abstract poem or had experinced it before, but I like the style and format. It also caries alot of emotion, which I love to see effectively carried out in poems. Good job