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tigertess — The Running Comentary
Published: 2003-09-22 03:16:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 131; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Description This is a poem which
I wrote to keep you trapped
In this time and space

I have taken you
Somewhere and you must
Explore…

My lush, vibrant gardens
The blood-scarlet poppies,
Perfumed
With the sand-man’s false oblivion

Misty, moist mornings
Chipped boats at their moorings
Swamps and mud-monsters.

You hear
My breeze humming
through peach-laden orchards
The drowsy bee drumming
Black velvet antenna
On rain-sprinkled rose

While the gurgling stream
Twinkles silver and sunshine
and on it goes, and goes
And goes…

So you’re here
You just are.
Human dreams have no ending
And neither does this
It goes on
in your head.
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Comments: 1

driftwood [2003-09-22 16:42:38 +0000 UTC]

The imagery is delicious. I really like the concept of this. This is just so alive, so fresh. A garden of sempervirent ideas blooming into the readings heart and mind.

Tasteful, delicate, and oddly aggressive.

Thanks

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